ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132)

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Muskaan_87

@Muskaan_87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Superb:)
Will be waiting for next update:)

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Dnt wanna share!

@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Hayeee he wants a kiss <3

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@nidhu18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Awesome update loved Arnav's POV . God can't wait for the Kiss update, pls make it sooner

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

When I read the note in the beginning which said that there is a Hindi song in the update, I was thinking that may be Khushi breaks into an impromptu dance, she is perfectly capable of that, but NEVER in my wildest imagination had I expected Buaji to start singing in the middle of the night and that too ' Tip tip barsa pani'... Go Buaji!!!!🤣

The part in the park was awesome... and yes I completely agree with Khushi that Arnav in a leather jacket and aviators is TROUBLE...! 😆 I love how Arnav leaves her all flustered...😊

So Arnav cant get her out of his head... Little surprise there...! the way he checked on Khushi to make sure she is comfortable made me go all Aww... Loved reading his POV... 😊

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adhu11

@adhu11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Beautiful. Lovely update. He wants a kiss.khushi now what will u do, baby? big trouble😆

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#776

amazing update

loved to arnav's pov!! he is as much as affected by khushi as she is!!

omg.. they nearly kissed!!

and arnav's demand!!

cant wait for next chapter

thanks for the pm

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Wonderful Capter.

Imagining Buaji singing 'tip tip barsa paani' in the middle of the night had me grinning from ear to ear😃

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BarunsBalwantK

@BarunsBalwantK

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Muwaaa superbbb as alwaysss dear

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#779

How could you end the update at such a interesting and anticipating part, I don't care but I demand a very quick update for the next part, lol.

Anyways coming to the update as always absolutely fantastic and fabulous,

Wow Arnav is clearly very attracted to Khushi,

Awww loved the part where Arnav was watching Khushi sleep and she grabbed his hand, lol.

Buaji singing PMSL and what a song choice superb.

Khushi having a dirty dream about Arnav, I'm loving it.

Wow the part in the lovers park was absolutely brilliant and Arnav and Khushi's close encounter was just fabulous, so intimidate, passionate and perfect.

I'm glad Arnav does nothing for free and Khushi should give him a lovely reward.

Simply loved the update it was a brilliant read,

The pre cap looks awesome, can't wait to read and see if Khushi kisses him.

Thanks for the PM,

EAGERLY waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#780

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved ArHi...sweet...loved dua's song...poor Arnav...loved Arnav's plan...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm