FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out)

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aliahayse

@aliahayse

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

hi,

thank you very much for the new chapter. You ecris really well. As a friend said in his comment I also wish that some of the scenes that you ecris also performed in the show. Slok I wonder what will be done to regain the heart of Astha. I think it'll be a great spot since Astha no longer trust Slok. I look forward to following.

good luck

ayse .

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

i think this was one of the best chapters yet...i loved the dialogues before the ceremony, the mangalsutra part was a classic!!! and i also loved shlocks reaction when she was forcing jothi to stay...cause he had no idea! i also liked how he said that he didnt argue with her about work cause she was homesick...but he didnt agree...i loved her flippant replies...loved that he wats a girl and was offended that she compared him to such a guy

i thought the whole police sargar was a bit much, and niranjan going a head with it was a little blurred...wasnt to sure about how he reacted and why he agreed...and also the conversation between father and son was a little vague...

but i thought it was just brilliant, hats of to your ideas and writing style...you know the trps will rock if they followed ur path...well done

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sarah-adil84

@sarah-adil84

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Loved this update can't wait for the next eagerly waiting :)

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Okay thanks for clearing things😊so silly of me to not understnd the "cut" thing...i thot in fit of rage astha wud do smthg lyk that😆

Hmm luved it as always...So Ayi did smthg today agnst NA's wish😲waiting to c what convo they wl hv after this incident!

How did I forget🤪whn shlok said he alwys wanted a baby girl..that ws so cute! bt then he realisd it wud never happn..luveddd that scene😳

Edited by Aishaa3 - 12 years ago

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
Okay thanks for clearing things😊so silly of me to not understnd the "cut" thing...i thot in fit of rage astha wud do smthg lyk that😆
Wl read n comment soon!😊

Never say never 😉

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Mary i ❤️❤️❤️'d it!!!!!😆

This was th Shlok I was rooting for...🥳

Thank u for clarifying!

OMG the bil crawling under the table🤣...n Shlok upturning the whole thing

Despite so much antagonism betwn themselves...(criminal &victim😆)..They have an amazing comfort level...these instances will slowly propel Astha to see beyond the mask he weaved in to the REAL Shlok!

Sojal😆

The manglsutra moment...& baby girl😳

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

very well written...
it was fab...
loved to see ashlok relationship...it was better now...
lovellyyy

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jacobharry10011

@jacobharry10011

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

i just started watching this serial yesterday and came to this form
nBANG👍🏼ur FF
Totally loved it
Please add me to ur PM list

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

glad that Jyoti was save by Aastha.. loved it..

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#310

Loved your update thank you, I love how Astha and Shlok handled the situation. I hope Anjali will be nicer to Astha. What's wrong with NA his daughter is living a terrible life and he doesn't want her to give evidence he is a horrible dad. Can't wait to read more. Thank you

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