*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update amazingly good. cudnt be more better. Fantastic. Beautifully written. Loved evry it of it. update sooon


Hey Thanks for reading and enjoying!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: littlemissstar

amazing update..
finally they both realized!!
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beautifully written..anjalis part wen khushi was vomitting was lol 😆 n nks bhussa was also too good 😉


Oky! thanks for liking these parts. They are my fav too!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

Awww what a Passionate Update...

Glad that Arnav realizes his love towards Kushi...
Happy Diwali dear.


He he! thats coz Arshi are my passion! Happy diwali😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heckwidif

amazing update..so much of passion and emotin and hey! i did not receive the pm this time😆


What the! No PM!😳 Okay have added you to my buddy list !😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am enjoying this story...and want the last chapter very quickly please!pretty please!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

OMG, what an update!

I'm ebbing in the world of ecstasy!
Finally they became one, they made love so passionately! I was having goose bumps while reading your sublime description. everything was so perfect; khushi was wearing red lehenga, with his mom's chunri, on their sexy bed inside Sheesh mahal! And most important is, they both confessed their love to each other.

When khushi was spewing and feeling sick, I thought did they already make love? Are you planning to show something in the FB? when Anjali also taunted her, i got confused. OK, it was just her sickness. But anjali is a sweet sister that told her about Arnav's feelings for her. It sure helped her to take her decision.

But I'm sad that you are planning to end the story. 😭 i will miss this tale so much.


Awww Soha! Thanks for your kind words. 🤗I am elated that you are ecstatic.
The story would have ended one day or another Soha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thankyou so much!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asrnkkgsr

Woww..!tat was an awesum update...realy rly loved it. Waiting for the last update. Thanks for d PM.


Thanks for appreciating the story.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana

wonderful update..
finally arnav has confessed his love to khushi...


Yes he has! Thanks for liking!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

at once even i thought that may she is preg but then i thought when did they do it...lol all the family is crazy...nyc update


Ha ha! Yes the family is indeed crazy😃 thanks for pointing that out!

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