*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun
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What a big Bang wala (Pun intended) update tha😉☺️ Loved the twists and heartache. NK's perceptive nature and Arnav's Passion. - Ufff! it was full of sparkles and fireworks indeed. I love how in your story Diwali was not about a missed Kiss but about culmination of Love.👏

Aakhir bed ne dono ko milahi diya⭐️

Bang wala update! Love that!😆 🤗

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: l.savitree
That was a wonderful chapter love it❤️

Thanks a tonne!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: adhu11
Beautiful. Finally he confessed. Loved it😳

thanks for finding it beautiful! so are you!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: anu1017
Aww finally he said it!!! Awesome update😊

yes Finally!😃 Thanks for enjoying!

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: aayt
wow NK was quite kool all about wedding called off unexpected but not bad at all
poor Anjali n her assumptions made khushi pregnant n all GOD bless u Anjali

arnav didn't let opportunity waste for even a min n consummated on that very bad

their suhaagraat bed khushi's submission was unexpected though I was expecting confessions

wait promise but they only jumped on the bed n done that ☺️

he fine confessed I LOVE U but poor khushi was asleep

lovely update😉

Poor Khushi was asleep?!! What the! he just has to say it again and maybe do it again, doesn't he?😉 🤗

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
wow loved it

Aww! thanks!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: ranogill
Wonderful..wonderful chapter...at last they are one...loved it

Thank you for liking it so much. Me happy!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: Arshifflover
Ohhh myyy goooddd loved it and yes the end bit was really needed hope she is pregnant would bring a twist to the story and please update soon

I have no idea if she is pregnant😉 😃

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

Absolutely brilliant update:D

Loved every bit of it<3

OMG these two are so dumb. One couldn't get that he has feelings for the other and the other one cannot understand the hints, I mean the great ASR had came to rescue her and still she had doubts?! Crazy people.

I am glad that people around then have some brains. I loved NK, he is so sweet. I want to hug him tight and tell him that dude, u rock..!!

Aww the scene between Arnav and Khushi's parents was heart warming. It was beautifully written:)

The last part was amazing. I loved it. These two were so desperate, I never knew that LOL It was awesome. Jadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan, tujhko bhula ke ab jaau kahan☺️

Epic..!! Waiting to read the next part. I know the next part is the last one. I respect your decision but i want you to come up with another story:)

Happy Diwali<3

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Sanghamitra Roy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#560

Lovd it sooo much..
I just cnt describe how i m feeling..
Oh my god! Oh my god!
Arnav cnfess..
Wow! wow!
Amazing , wondrful, superb update..
Cntinue soon..
Thnks for pm..