*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 57

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow wow wow!!!
Amazing update...
Loved it...finally he confessed his feelings for her..
And...they did it..hehe
Update soon pls...can't wait to read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much for d pm ...its nyc to see dat even qrnav has realised his feelings for ihushi ...and now wen dey hv become one ...its no single sided love ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAPPY DIWALI...
sorry i m 1 day late..


first when i read title in pm i was like ..
i knew it kuch na kuch hone wala hai..

aww i loved arnav rxn when khushi talked to nk...arnav can be adorable sometime.
oh this chap told us that nk has brain has he got the idea that khushi didnt want to marry him ,
thankgod anjali's husband is in army...indian army zindabad..for keeping separate diwali party..otherwise...


i was glad khushi was ready to take the risk...it was not a risk...she knew that arnav has fallen for her..it was just matter of time ,he wud confess.
the chunri scene .it was beautiful...it was like he accepted her...may be in form of his wife.

last part was so amazingthey finally used their SR BED u wrote it beautifully keeping the essence of arnav khushi...and the cherry on the cake was his declaration...

no u cant end this.
p.s-how sr bed reached luckhnow??it shud have been in shantivan na??
p.s2-if u really want to end..give an epilogue to showing how their kid now messing with their dear bed..🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry the late comment dearie.. But Diwali held me up!!

This for once, was the awesmest diwali gift ever!

While Nk's brain is definately not just filled of - bhusa.. ;P
Khushi's spunky and fiesty side was a delight too..:p

the way he adorned her with his Mother's chunri.. That minute was just so beautiful!


After that, Khushi's direct answer to all his questions.. - She loves him and is ready to take every risk.. For him!!


Then it was them, their love, their need, their passion and their pleasure.. Crossing all the boundraies - They became one!! And Arnav's confession at the end, just made me whole more beautiful! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
read it, loved it, sorry for the late comment. I just loved it. No overdose of anything. Waiting for the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally Arnav n khushi confessed...
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nihasan

Wah wah wah
5nlly they hav done it
n wat nw...wl arnav leave her n go
i hpe he dsnt deny her aftr dis
cnt soon


Arnav has to go to london yaar for the contest.😭 But lets see...😃😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the warning Wiwy. I loved the mandir scene with maa's chunari. NK's isn't really dumb, whew! So, will Arnav take Khushi along with him to the buildering contest? Waiting for the next update. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

OMG! I think Kushi has just made the biggest mistake of her life! He is surely going to leave her and go away. he has just as much as said so! Oh no! I hope Kushi does not suffer too much. I am not liking this Arnav at all. He is selfish to the core. Only thinking of himself, his desires, his needs! Oh God, I hope he doesn't think this is payment for saving her! Ugh!


Payment for saving her!!!! That's gross, man! Relax!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Glad you liked!😃

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