Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

love the update.it was amezing as always.
love the childess manvi.
virat still in rosh though its expect as u mention in previous part that rosh is a importand part of him but i really want he give also justic to his and manvi relation.
angry and jealous virat can't wait for next part.
plz update soon.

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Like it
awesome update
too good
thnx for pm
fab

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AsadZoyaILU

@AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

your not rushing but i would like to see possesive manvi and virat plz

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FlowerHater

@FlowerHater

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

loved the upd8 Ayesha! about opinion I would like to say that no, neither it seems to be rushed nor artificial because u r not showing Virat all lovey dovey, completely in love with maanvi or completely forgetting Roshni!!! He has just accepted maanvi as his future and present supported with all rational and logical things she had done for him, sufficient enough for anyone to treasure someone like her!!!

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luvmanat

@luvmanat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Story is going in right way...
Plz cont

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

thanx for updating...

I like dis changed virat a lot...he is trying to shw manvi wht he feels abt her wid his gestures...I like it

virat lukd angrier at adhiraj...lagta woh gaya kaam se...
update soon

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#517

Lovely update..

Loved Virman part..

Cant wait for the next update..

Really wanna now what Virat will do with Adhiraj...

Why is Virat still thinking about Roshni???

Pleasee continue soon..

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#518

read both the parts
loved them
loved the fact that the updates were completely of virman
thanks a lot for the pm

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Loved the Update..!!!

Virat bringing her to a place which is peaceful n spent some time with her...but then he had his ways to live those memories with Roshni...he had a apt question will he be able to do justice to Maanvi..and Maanvi is happy but she still feels something a miss in her relationship..and loved that u have developed the plot so wel..that 1 comment from Adhiraj can make Virat more expressive and speak out his feelings and not lets his actions speak,.as sometimes words can be better assurance...Liked it..Virats behaviour isn't abrupt he has taken so much time to know his feelings towards Maanvi..and now is the time to xpress..rather than staying in his past..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM!!!