Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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Devan.monalisa

@Devan.monalisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Amazing update! Liked the way manvi and virat we're enjoying the rain! Also liked virat's care and his effort to know more about manvi! I don't think virat's change is drastic!

Thanks for the pm! Waiting eagerly for the next part!

Edited by Devan.monalisa - 11 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Fab update Ayesha..!! ❤️ Virman moments are so lovely.. Well the changes in Virat is very much natural not artificial at all.. Finally he has accepted the reality and is ready to move on but that doesn't mean he forgot Roshni.. He cherishes her memory.. But he really needed to come out of his shell and live his life... And he is doing that only 😃.. Now Adhiraj's presence will definitely make him more possessive of Manvi.. Can't wait to see an angry and jealous Virat ji 😳.. Will be waiting for the next.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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tellyrox

@tellyrox

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#533

hey...me commenting after along time...really sorry about that...I am having problems with the internet...I like how virman are getting along...looking forward for the future updates...

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#534

awesome update
loved it
the rain scene was superb
the hotel room scene.. I thought you will add some romance there...
but I didn't like virat still thinking about roshni
the last part is nice... Adi ... Virat angry
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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shirhid

@shirhid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

amazing part

virat become angry

wanted to see the angry possesive nd romantic virat in nxt part plzzz

nd no i dnt think virat change is rushed

infact i to loved this changed virat

thanx for pm

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Nope Ayesha, Virat part is quite natural atleast 4 me.

But I really feel sad or even bad for Manvi, Virat heart and mind still filled with Roshni with quite natural as he loves her but i don't understand if he loves her than how could he love manvi or justice with her love. He spend al most everything with roshina and manvi is always second for him but for manvi, he is always her first. He is trying...

I always got lost in ur updates... Great work and well written Ayesha

Waiting 4 next part... Thanx 4 d pm

Take Care Ayesha

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Lots to catch up on but getting there slowly but surely.

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Ayshuuu thank you for the update!!

I loved Virat Manhandling her! FOBL soo cuteee ^_^ <3

Awww Virat falling asleep scene was so so adorable! I thought she would join him :/ *pouts*

and no i dont feel it rushed or fake, it seems perfect! :D

update soon, loved the update, as always ur writing is flawless and brilliant :D

-Pari

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Ahh ! Thank u so much for long update twino :D
I juz took some minutes of break from studies n here I got such a amazing refreshment :D
The update was cute n sweet :)) especially virman moments <3 sweet simple n nice :D
No, it is not at all rush ! :)
Loved the way u have described everything !
OMG ! Jealous virat ;) ab aaiga Mazaa :P
Really really looking forward for next update ! Do update soon twino :D will be waiting <3

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#540

awesome!! no virat's change doesn't seem rushed or artificial, its just perfect, loved everything ..though i don't like virat recalling about rosh but then its normal, as you can't just erase someone from your memory..im excited for next, can't wait for possessive and jealous virat ji!!