Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Loved the Update..!!! specially the song that u have uploaded with it...listning to it after so long..Virat now seriously is thinking abt her feelings towrads Maanvi...hope he names it soon..but like his proposal at 10 minutes past 2AM..kya timing hai..Absolute unpredictable lie Virat...Eager for next Ayesha!!!

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

It was short but but but amazing.. So meaningful and important.. Although Virat seems still confused but Manvi was awsum, the way she took over the situation inspite of being hurt tremendously beautiful.. Her feelings, emotions and pain she have sided with them to comfort him.. Hope u will update soon. Waiting.

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Ayshuuu!!

I miss youu but i know youll be back soon with a bang, as always 😛

Muahhh Love you Buddyyy 🤗

Coming to the update, OMG! Hayeee i love the sleeping arrangements, when he takes her in his arms it just oozes love and trust, that i can't explain, and it usually ends up being my fav part of the update, saachii 😳 so thank you, for giving into my demand with that 😆🤗

OMG!! After you recently pranked me, telling me that they would only be getting married in the last chapter, that was definetly a shocker for me 🤣 oh but a most pleasant one! Finallyyy they will be getting married! That part was cute when Mannu thinks of when she used to pass the day with just a look nd now, she sleeps in his arms

update soon please 😛

-Luv Pari

p.s. This Virat Ji is alll mineee ❤️ Haye I love him 😳

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

awesome update
loved it
virat proposed manvi at 10mins past 2am for marriage😲
cute...
continue soon

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Aww lovely update.. how she was feeling lonely a moment ago.. and den complete with Virat.. and how impatiently he was waiting for her reply.. loved it ❤️

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manuthi mathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

nice update... they soon get married... happy for virman...

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Mindblowing update Aysha...
Yes its too short ,,,but we can manage wd wndrful wrk
abt update its really suprb
Cnt explains in wrds
luv manvi's selfless and virat's selfish love...
Luv the way u explain virat's insecurities
luv virat's angry behaviour...i m crazy for him
mindblowing dear
keep rocking
plz plz plz
plz plz plz
plz plz plz
plz plz plz
plz plz plz
update soon wo bhi long bala
much awaited reader

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Ayesha it was short but brilliant part
Virat propose her at 1;50 am that was funny and superb
loved it the whole update to the core
Virat is little stubborn...but liked it that attitude of him
waiting for next part eagerly
but a big thanx sweety for giving before weekends
take care and love u sweety
😃

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

nice update he was still filling insecure
to loose her and he bring marriage proposal
front of her update soon

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hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

wow what suprise,
thank you so much

oww virat is so sweet, he is just soo scared to lose her,
but i love manvi that every time she can make him so comfortable...

can we expect soon a shadii 😃

great work

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