Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Awesome update Ayesha!! ❤️ I loved the flashback part.. Its very emotional and painful.. Beautifully written 👍🏼.. Virat felt unwanted because his family sent him away when he needed them the most and there he met Rosh and fell in love with her but her rejection brought all those pain back so he left everything behind and since then he was a loner.. I think he is kind of right at his place.. He didn't know much about Rosh and her life.. She used to cut herself! That's shocking.. But still I don't understand why is he blaming himself for her death! Guess I have to wait to know that :p.. Glad that finally he opened up to Manvi.. I'm sure she will be able to heal his wounds :).. Will be waiting for the next part.. Enjoy your break and come back soon Ayesha! 😃 Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

awesome update aysha
loved it
its nice that virat is opening up to manvi
virat felt rejected ..so he left roshni
but y is rohan telling virat is responsible for his sis death
I didn't understand the meaning of she is a cutter...means does she cut herself ...does it mean like that
viren and virat bonding is nice
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Ayshuuu,

As always amazing update!! Wow, its good to get the past clear, although only the next update will clear it its obvious Virat isn't really at fault here woh tho waise bhi i already knew 😛 My Virat Ji can't hurt anyone ever 😳...

I did miss my VirMan though in the update..but i know ull make it upto me 😉😛😆

your break is going to leave me wallowing in sadness, but you deserve it..so enjoy, take care, nd i also know it will be worth it, so its okay..

Love you, cant wait for ur comeback... 🤗

-Pari

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Wow Ayesha just superb
finally truth is out
Virat is justified his POV
Ijust simply love Manvi...how she understand his situation
looking forward...hows there life going on
waiting for next part
update soon and Thanx 4 the PM😃

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Twino🤗 Finally virat passed is revealed :D this suspense was killing me from the start ! virat emotions his feelings were written so well Ayesha (Y)
the best thing happen is he open up to manvi ! :)
from the past tat reveled , i can't blame viratji for rosh death yet ! in his way he was right ! he was feeling rejected he was heart broken So how can we expect a person in tat state to noe wat rosh was suffering . he himself was suffering ! :/
but still some past is yet to reveled ! waiting for tat .
i guess this revelation is gonna be great turning point for virman relationship :D
can't wait for next !
have a nice break twino but come back soon with a bang 😃❤️

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

superp udate

loving it

finally virat past is opening

waiting for next update to know whole tpast

update soon

thanks for the pm

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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Hey finally caught up with the story and man was i in for a treat!...

I did not expect Roshni to have died!..

Now virat's past is getting way more intriguing.. absolutely excited to see what happened after that!...

Manvi is caught in the middle of it all!.. Rohan was Roshnis brother??!!.. woah!.. sooo did NOT expect that..!SHOCKER!.. makes it all the more intersting..

ROFL @ Rohan's love confession scene.. You almost had me there!..😆

So Pooja's the one who he is in love with!.. phew!.. thank god we dont have to got throgh another love triangle!..😆

Lovely pece of writing there.. and love how you have given importance to Virat's acceptance and Manvi's apprehension about their relationship! Glad we did not have to see them rush into it..

Thank you for the pms.. il try and be little more regular with the comments..

Looking forward to the update. cant wait...

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Superrr update yaar.. Finally Virat past is coming out.

Pleasee continue soon..

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊😊

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Wow so I just read ch 26

I knew Rohan would play an important role but he being Rosh's brother totally unexpected.

I can understand from Rohan's POV he was upset and angry because of his sister, and even Virat feels he is responsible, but we don't know the whole story and I love the fact that Manvi didn't judge Virat based on Rohan's allegations. she wanted to know the whole story but she wanted to know it from Virat. because she trusts him and knows that he may not have been at fault,

I love that through the whole Virat and Rohan drama, she stayed by his side, it's hard when you have to choose between a friend and the person you love, but manvi stayed with Virat, because she knows him and understands him and without knowing the whole story she didn't make assumptions.

I know you've updated the next one too, but have time for only this one right now, I'm reading in installments during my breaks.

Love where this story is going, the past finally coming out, which is what Virat needs to move forward.