Cross Connection SS #2 : A KriYansh and SwaRon story ch10+epi, pg17

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Typing error Vaish, it had to be I just cant thank you enough. I never can.

Maumita- I didnt do anything that great. Just a small dedication. Thats it. And I am glad you liked it.

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

So this finally came to an end.. :'(

But well.. The end was ahmazing.. Just showed how their lives are gonna be like in the coming days...

aww.. Yu gave so muj of KR here... Am so glad!

I guess vaish has to be thanked huh :P

Well I so wanted to see how KR would be like after getting into a relation... And there could be nothing better than what u presented!... :*

My my.. Kria s one bold girl! Loved her... Serves Rey right ;)

The way you wrote their intimate scenes.. Its just the way I prefer..and write :D

Leaving it all to one's imagination.. Mm..

So this is the end? :(

Well.. Thanks for such an osm story on KR... Hoping to find many more ff's from Yu :)

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Fida- I would prefer Short stories over FanFictions. And this had to end... and so it did. Well yes, she needs to be thanked for punishing me. And I am glad you liked it. Thank you.. thank you.. fidu. And I was supposed to portray KriYansh well this time or else people would have come haunting.. Isn't it?

Now lets see how they react this time...

And I was really happy with reviews on the previous updates :D

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

well definitely m sad as its the end...but neverthless m happy by the way it came to an end...kria being the confused soul..nd rohan helping her out...loved aggresive reyaansh...finally they confessed...it was cute...as of swaron...i can actually imagine swayam pouting...aawww ...well sharon did so much to remove his sadness...amazing...nd yeah...nt to 4get...kria's reasons for him hiring her were perfect...ofcrse no 1 else can do wat she can...overall m happy...waiting for the other time when u r gonna make us happy...as of now all the very best.👍🏼...if possible...try updating clash of titans

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

aisi kaunsi punishment ho gayi yeh?? :P

saala help ki thi maine...

this is no punishment... :P

remind me... i got to give you one more... ^_^

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Vaish- It was you who was pissed with me for some reason..

and then I asked you what can I do for you and you told me two things..

out of which one was updating this.. rest all after some time, and that some time happens to be after exams.. some day.. :P

And of course, you always help me out.. theres no doubt to that..

what remind for one more.. already itna de rahi hu.. isnt it enough?

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Akanksha- well there can be others who can do what Kria started off with, for Rey.. but definitely the emotions would be lacking.

Or else there can be tons of girls who can be clinging to him and pay him instead :D

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Vaish- It was you who was pissed with me for some reason..

and then I asked you what can I do for you and you told me two things..

out of which one was updating this.. rest all after some time, and that some time happens to be after exams.. some day.. :P

And of course, you always help me out.. theres no doubt to that..

what remind for one more.. already itna de rahi hu.. isnt it enough?

u know nah how much i louv you.. ^_^

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Gargi

@Gargi.swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

I luved it...u portrayed d characters soo well,it was a treat 2 read ur ss😊

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Hey Shenz I just read the entire SS in one go and I loved it.. The concept was awesome and the way you portrayed their love stories were awesome..❤️
You're a fine writer girl really...
Be it sensuous or romantic I loved it all..
The highlight for me was when Sharon fulfilled Swayam's wish for her and wore a bikini for him and then the passionate night they shared awesome I loved you story thank you so much for sending me a pm for such an amazing story..😊