Cross Connection SS #2 : A KriYansh and SwaRon story ch10+epi, pg17

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Amazing chapter and epilogue shenz
loved it
haha...thanx to vaishu agar usne kaha tuje epi ke liye :p

so finally she confessed
good to know that rey heard everything warna kria toh kabhi batati hi nahi

i loved that last scene
hehe bossy hona rey pe bhari padh gaya...

Beautifully written yaar
too gud

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

loyely ending luved it 2 d core

Edited by dollydua - 11 years ago

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

I have not forgotten about this SS. I swear! Go to my status and read! -_-

I am just trying to ease my self as lots of reading is on pending. I am actually making some schedule to get at least 2 days totally free. One for reading and for commenting!

Lastly, babua hum tumka maas na karo hu kabhi, samjhi ke naaahi samjhi? last epilogue main tum o Swaronwa ka kahan bhul aya ho. Lagta hai likhna hi bhul gayo thi! 😡

^Crap, i know! 🤣

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

finally love is in the air...gonna miss this ff...

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Beautiful ending ...

Loved it ...

Great work ...

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MANAVI KHATTER

@dazzlingmanavi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

res

unres

omg...

maine ye ss pehle kyu nhi padha...????

i just read the whole ss in a go

this was just so damn fabulously hot😉

i sincerely loved it

shuru se shuru karte hai

super nice concept...👏

very unique i must say😃

kriya ki shaadi swayam se...🤢

swayam and mr. flirt...🤣 🤣 🤣

swayam flirting with the bff of his fiance...sahi ja rha hai boss 😆

kriya ne aese flirt ko ha bhi khe di...i am so proud of that girl...🤔

krisha banged in the organizers office...way to go girl...😎

rey's entry...

loved reyam bond...

girls v/s boys...pehle takraar phir pyaar

kriya ko swayam ne room me kheecha...🥺

i hated it but then it was sensible...after all they are about to be engaged

swaron dance...yippie...

rey ne kriya ko gira diya...😆

rey ka naam mr. over smart 😆

joseph kr boys are so 🤬...😡

kriya bani kali mata for rey...poor him...😆

loved krisha bond

kriyam ki engagement...😭

unki engagement me wo 'he' wali quoting mujhe confuse kar rhi thi...😕

trying room scene...i loved it but ye kya tha...swaron and like that...that was so unbelievable

sharon told kriya everything...good best friend

kriya ka reaction...😲 i didnt expected it

when everything got clarified i was like...yipppie...

well i kind of guessed it...

swaron kissing in front of kr...sharam karlo bacha log...😳

the whole campaigning was awsm

lovey dovey swaron...awww...

kriya kissing rey for a bet...😆 😳 😃

but rey pulling her back and kissing her...kya baat rey...mauke pe chauka 😉

swayam ne kriyaansh ko band kar diya...he is a true brother of rey...uski dil ki khawish puri kar di...😆

i loved both swaron and kriyaansh bedroom scenes...they were so so so nice

the swaron shower scene was super wala duper

swaron found kriyaansh kissing...😲 😳 😆

kriya ki lift wali imagination...control bacha...sabar rakho...😉

i was quite eager for kr confession and u showed it very uniquely

bina bole hi sabkuch bol diya...nice

the swaron farmhouse scene was superbly beautiful

the prologue was awsm

swayam baby intazaar karo thoda...sharon kahi nhi bhaag rhi...tumhi se shaadi karegi...intezaar ka phal is yummy

kriyaansh ne koi jhagha chodi bhi hai...kahi bhi shuru ho jaate hai

i loved the office scene...it was so fab... ☺️

well done sweetheart...👏

overall i loved everything...😃 😃 😃

agar main kuch bhi bhool gyi hu review karna to sorry...😒

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Remind me why I need to comment...

Yessh I remember i had given you the punishment...

and uss punishment mein bhi mereko khade rehna pada tha tere sar pe...

proclaiming my love for you countless times but still people didn't seem to beleve it...

so tell me why should i comment?

why ??

whyyy????

becoz i love you???

or...

becoz i love the chapter.???

or the epilogue??? :P

talll me.. taaalll me...

so coming to the update...

i really loved the way you showed the entire thing..

so many scenes.. ^_^

plus the fact how you showed the confession...

i always wondered how you were gonna break the confession..

and i really loved it...

the idea wajjhh unique...

and then the scenes.. ^_^

how absolutely i loved the...

thank you for sending them to me on FB msngr... mer kinna tp huya tha,,,

loved the entire thing...

huh...

it was such a beautiful SS...

amainfgly executed...

awesome it was.. :D

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Omg!!!!! Ye tune likha hai?? Sachhi me?? 😲

Sexyy!!!! Yummilicious update... :* 🤗

Whoa... Itna khulla romance ... 1 nhi 4 baar ... 😉

Dono ka mila ke 6 times.. bwahahaha 😆

Seriously... superrocking update... 👏

Rofl... swayam ordered a dress for sharon.. but what a bluff.. he recieved a bikni ... not bad ... 😲😆

Btw.. what was she wearing inside the sheet?? Nothing? 😛😉

Lolzzz.. shadi ki date late nikali hai toh kya kare... iska badla bhi sharon se nikalo... bwahahaha ☺️

Like their feelings come out... rohan made her say- whats bothering her .. & rey heard it... niceee...😃

Koi jagah chodi hai inhone?? Rey ka room.. kriya ka room... car .. table ... 🤣

Oyeee... ye placement cell ke hall me itni privacy?? Maana bahot sexy idea hai but possible kaise h?? 😆

Bolt kar ke aaya tha kya room already??? ... *lol.. u may want to kill me now* 🤪

Lolzzz... but that was way too seductive... his administrations... & her backfiring his plan... with her boldnesss...☺️

*phew* .. kal mera exam h... aur ab mujhse padhayi bhi nhi ho rhi... aage se tera update nhi padhungi... paper se pehle...😭😆