~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Ohh man!!
Dat was simply amazing
finally keya is here in d world...perfectly healthy..!!

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Amazing update...

Loved the way u showed Rey's concern for Kriya...

Finally keya is born...

The way u portrayed KR emotions were superb...

Loved it..

Plzzz update soon!!:):)

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Unresd..

normally i don't mix my prsonal life with my omment life..

lekin mereko thoda bhao khaana tha... 😛

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#384

D upgrade is beautiful luv it 😊

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#385

just loved it
awesome update
thanks for d pm

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Beautiful part ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for more ...

Continue soon ...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#387

res wil b edited soon😊

unres

OH GODDD!!!!!

this was mindblowingg nia👏

finallyyy keya s born

jus lovedd d way u described d feelings and emotions of rey and kria👏

beautifully written

loved t to d coreee❤️

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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ratika16

@ratika16

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Its was a beautiful chapter :-) loved it ! Keya was born ! Ahh amazing ! Update soon :-)

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#389

it was a fantastic chapter

the way the delivery was explained... along with their feelings. 👏

i really loved the part where vicky was touching kriya's belly.

it was really soothing.

then the way each character had an important role in this chapter. 👍🏼

but i missed rivaan like hell. 😭

the chapter was well penned down

thanks for the PM

update soon and do PM me.

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#390

awww manu... mmmuuuaaahhh :* 😎

kya likhti h re tu... aur kahan kahan se dhundh ke likhti hai... 😉

so... from the starting ... i thought rey jealous feel kar raha hoga... but rey is really mature ... so he was concerned abt neha's stress that time .. lol 🤣

such a sweet brother... so caring ... 🤗

it was really unexpected ... i never thought that keya will be born in this update... its all sudden actually... 😛

even i don't know.. how these things work... 😆

but the whole thing was really well written... neha n rey beside her ... her father-in-law helping her ... whole environment is soo cooperative... 😃

ya... she's small... 3.5 pound .. must be so fragile... 😳

rivaan ko bhi bula lo... he was really excited of all ... even m missing him... 😊

its really good to see him standing beside her... supporting her... awwwiiieee