~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

what an amzing chapppuy
my fav
just luvd it
so welll written
so welll you potrayed tge emtions
just so amzing
hats of to u to write this

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Oh my my my... *____*

Manu this was heaven...

one of the mosttt beautiful chaps of RTP i've ever read... 😳

Reading it was a pure bliss *___*

you described her whole delivery so beautifully... 😳

everything.. from being nervous..to being funny at times in order to lighten up the atmosphere...

it was just... BEAUTIFUL...

M in love with it...

kaha se laati ho itni detail mei likhne k experience..??? 😛

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

awesome one...finally keya aagayi... waiting 4 rivaan's reaction...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

the chapter was lovely... do continue soon and pm me

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

this was really amazing chapter

keya is born

beutifully written

loved wholr update

thanks for the pm

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Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

ahhh this update was just beautiful...

finally there and ours wait is over...

keya aa hi gyi...

and the way you wrote its so realistic...

the way you described the delivery...it was just purely beautiful..

loved it very very very much...

so update soon... (:

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

That was nice :)

I love how Rey was worried for Neha

Finally the baby is born :)

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#398

I liked it would be an understatement...
I just loved it...
Liked d way you wrote whole procedure..
Iam sure keya would be more like kriya...
Rey ka gussa is something..
Ranvijay is such a cool dad...
I really want to see some cute moments with keya...

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: Meesocute
I liked it would be an understatement...
I just loved it...
Liked d way you wrote whole procedure..
Iam sure keya would be more like kriya...
Rey ka gussa is something..
Ranvijay is such a cool dad...
I really want to see some cute moments with keya...

Wow you kinda summed it up 👍🏼

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: kriapatel
Supab update
lil emotional
finally keya born
that was really lovely feeling
the whole procesure
kr talk
all are so beautiful
u make this update really really beautiful
by ur words u enhance the beauty of giving birth
really...
love it

Thank You I m so glad I could make things well written and u liked it 😃