~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38 - Page 41

Originally posted by: sumimita

dearest mania...

my god.. first and foremost i must say that u r a perfect writer..

superb awsome..

every emotions was described so nicely and perfectly..

just loved it...

fabulous

thnks for the pm..

with love

moumita

Awww... moumota... that was so lovely of you to say this 🤗

Originally posted by: Lovelylavender

Dear mania..

I read ur reply n i m glad u like my reviews..

This chapter was as magical as the chapters you write..

I cant express the beauty of this piece in words..

The care for neha which turned into anger n the poor doctor got scolded😆

The way kriya was there as a support..

Just the line rey i love you and i know my love i love you too said it all..

The panic in reys pov when he knew that something was wrong with kriya

And the whole procedure of delivery you explained was just as marvellous as it could get..

All the emotions that you showed when rey felt his baby delivering their baby was just mesmerizing..

The way neha and ranvijay were there for kriya gave all the bond between the family..

Even when rey consoled neha for not blaming herself was very touching..😊

And the last line of the chapter truly gave a great end to the chapter and a great start to the new phase of their lives..

As i say u wrote magically mania..

U never fail to impress me with the way you describe peoples feelings in words..

I just adore and admire you for the commendable work👏

PS: again if u reply let me know but m sorry if i m nt able to reply so soon back as exams r startin..

But asap ill come back to read it.. 😊

Dear Lovey (Oops! I dun know your name)
As I said before you really make my day or evening in today's case 😆
What I love about your reviews is they are 100 % genuine.
Writers too need readers like you to encourage them.
But to tell you a secret all my updates are inspired by my daily activities
You must be wondering about the child birth i wrote earlier.
Well lets just say, that was something beyond my reach but sometimes studies comes handy.
Read my post in the update column, you'll know the answer.

Got to know you have exams coming. All the best n keep reading.

Thank You for your lovely words. 😃

Ohhh...

Mannnuuu!! :*

Thanks for updating though!! I kinda lost interest in writing now a days!! this will work as an inspiration!!😃😃

awesom
welll written
ur description is so perfect
luvd the chapppy
supr amazing
thnks for pm

awesome one

loved the chap... rey taking care of kriya and his family...]