~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

stupid ppl college wale... -_-

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: magical_mania

Would say don't hold onto that 😛

ki fark painda... 😆

thodi der mein answer aise hi aa jayega... 😛

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

don't take it ki am not angry...

abhi am a bit preoccupied to channelize my negative energy... 😆

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magical_mania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
stupid ppl college wale... -_-

Wahi to bechari vaishu ko innna assignment karna padega :(

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

arey had it been i was present in the class toh bhi chal jaata...

main to andha dhund teer chala rhi hun... 😆

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

yeh toh andha kanoon hai...

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One of the beautiful chapters...

Ahhh...

Keya is born...

And in my defence i did think of that reason too.. lekin it was pretty obvious.. so i kept it on my safe shelf... ;)

I loved how rey goes all doctor papa in so short...

feels blissful.. i am sad that RV wasn't there... but koi nah.. aata hi hoga munda humara...

I juts love how you show the depthness of relations hsared...

it is so beautiful and serene..

and amount of research you put.. awesome..

waiting for next part...

sorry for short comment.. buggie is angry.. so kahin toh angry dikhayega woh

Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago

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Shanaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Dear mania..

I read ur reply n i m glad u like my reviews..

This chapter was as magical as the chapters you write..

I cant express the beauty of this piece in words..

The care for neha which turned into anger n the poor doctor got scolded😆

The way kriya was there as a support..

Just the line rey i love you and i know my love i love you too said it all..

The panic in reys pov when he knew that something was wrong with kriya

And the whole procedure of delivery you explained was just as marvellous as it could get..

All the emotions that you showed when rey felt his baby delivering their baby was just mesmerizing..

The way neha and ranvijay were there for kriya gave all the bond between the family..

Even when rey consoled neha for not blaming herself was very touching..😊

And the last line of the chapter truly gave a great end to the chapter and a great start to the new phase of their lives..

As i say u wrote magically mania..

U never fail to impress me with the way you describe peoples feelings in words..

I just adore and admire you for the commendable work👏

PS: again if u reply let me know but m sorry if i m nt able to reply so soon back as exams r startin..

But asap ill come back to read it.. 😊

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luv_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

its awesome update

loved it finally keya is born

superb

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moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

dearest mania...

my god.. first and foremost i must say that u r a perfect writer..

superb awsome..

every emotions was described so nicely and perfectly..

just loved it...

fabulous

thnks for the pm..

with love

moumita

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kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Supab update
lil emotional
finally keya born
that was really lovely feeling
the whole procesure
kr talk
all are so beautiful
u make this update really really beautiful
by ur words u enhance the beauty of giving birth
really...
love it

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