~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

It was beautiful as ever...krisha fndship was appealing...
Nd dat conversation part was indeed fab...
No plz dont end it here...
More parts will be appreciated

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

That was just a scenic chapter... ^_^

I mean I just loved the way you used the words and everything...

It was so beautiful... ^_^

I mean the way words molded out was so perfect...

I really loved the introduction... Pata hai even I use it many a times... But this wala toh mera dil le gaya...

the falling in love analogy and marriage...Haaye... Absolutely... enthralling to read... Ki how where and why...

The way Kriyansh was talking was so beautiful... I mean RTP ke KR are like this only nah... ^_^

And then the gossip thing... I always marvel as to how you include naughtiness and sweetness so perfectly...

I loved how you crafted out the moments... ^_^

Sorry aaj main chotu comment dunga... mereko coaching bhagna hai... plus mere paas words nhi hai... i mean mereko samajh nhi rha... i mean it is just so beautiful... i end up on that topic only... :(

Lolluu... if it as in me I would have said never to end the story... but it would be a farce to keep you writing... and i know that a beautiful piece stretched loses all its beautiness,,,

I would say... do whatever you want to... Lekin return back with another work... Coz buggie would miss lollluuu then... [:v:]

Every week aisa karo ek OS likh diya karo... SO that i would get to read something from you... :*

Bye lolluuu...

Main coaching jaata hun.. late ho rha hun... :* :* :* :*

PS: i asked scraps pe khoobbb saare questions... ^_^

epilogue mein honeymoon dena... inko koi official honeymoon nhi mila nah... 😆 😛

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

AMAZING PART 👍🏼

LOVED IT ESPECIALLY REY AND KRIYA'S CHILDHOOD SCENE ON SWING. I LOVED THE DIALOUGES.

SHARON AND KRIYA;S BONDING IS SHOWN SO PERFETLY.😊

LOVED REY'S MONOLOUGE THINKING ABOUT THE COMING BABY.

DAT PART WAS SO SWEET WHEN KRIYA WAS UPON REY'S QUALITIES OZ WH HER HATE HER..😃

THIS IS ONE OF MY FAV. FF's.
LOVE U FOR WRITING THIS ONE.
🤗🤗🤗🤗
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
CLAPS AND HUGS FROM MY SIDE

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

aawww...this was such a sweet chapter...

m loving how they are managing everything in der life smiling...

soo happy Rey can now finally start his new life with Kriya..

all n all i can say...it was just perfect...

and trust me...i think it will be the perfect ending... seriusly...

so... i would prefer an epilogue now...

Loved it 😃

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GARIMA

@grungta11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Awesome update...:)

Luved it...:)

N please don't end it here update some more parts...:)

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Awesome update
Loved it very much

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Hmm..Iss story k Rey and Kriya are the uniquest KR k characters...

Itne Sweet , Caring , Understanding and naughty at the same time 😆...

Getting to read all of these qualities in the same couple , feels great ...

Being a Super-Star But still happening to live such a Sweet , almost 'Normal' life with Kriya , caring 'bout RV and Keya *Probably* already - What a personality he has 😉...

It wouldn't have been easy to leave all the Fame behind and lead a normal life But he did , for His Family , that was so Great...

Kon esa karta But he did , apni Beautiful si wife and bachon keliye 😉...

As for Kriya , her character all that Sweet , Normal , Understanding , Heights of Patience one - This wala character was Awesome-y types 😆...

Oh!! N i so love this 'Uncle Swayam' and the 'Naughty' wali Sharon , True Friends they are 😃...

As for the story , it is going Superb 😃...

That Flash-Back moment was Nice , Innocent KriYaansh 😆...

Love this story ❤️

About your question . Mere liye toh dono cases theek hain , But if u go for an epilogue , u better have a new story coming up soon 😳

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Fabulous update
loved it
I would love to read more chapters..

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Awesome update. .
beautifully written. ..
Loved it...
Krisharey part was too good... 😃
Rey n kriya r so perfect together. ...
I don't want this beautiful ff to end soon... Please do write more parts...
Waiting for d next update