~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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riddhima.r.

@riddhima.r.

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#281

A perfect gift.

Is Shivam going to be angry with rey's response? only you can tell ...

All in all it was a great update.

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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

awesome

loved it

update next part soon

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Amazing update..

Love the way u everytm potray KR...

I think Vicky has met wid an accident or sumthing happened to his parents...just a gues!!!

Plzzzupdate soon!!:):)

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

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i am so happy that your continuing and given the last few chapters as well

when kriya was in her dangerous mood 😲

hormones are a big problem 😛

i really liked the way rey calmly handled the situation.

it was beautiful

i simply loved it

and thanks a lot for the answer. i will try it myself and if i am able to write long updates i will definitely give the credit to you..

waiting for the next chapter

update soon

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

I mean this was ethereal...

I absolutely love how you show these feelings..

and how you dwell into past...

I mean its just beautiful...

The pregnancy hormones kicking in were a treat to read... and i just loved how she voiced her emotions.. go girl...

Mereko khoob maja aaya padhke.. ;)

And then the making up was all very beautiful...

The end part.. lets say,.. something happened... ;)

I absolutely adore the way you write...

its so soothing and enchanting..

amazing and so very beautiful...

awesome..

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

loved the way story is moving forward ... 😊

refreshing the memories of their first kiss... kriya was actually very innocent... 😉

they were in love but haven't voiced out their feelings by then... still wanted to share their very first kiss with each other...

its clear ... that they wanted it to be special.. n preserve those memories... 🤗

rey's guilt is justified...but even then kriya is not wrong... what is done is all past now... 😔

ohhh... but her reactions are scary... its her anger speaking... otherwise she'll never use such foul words for rey.. or blame him... 😳

its good that he took it lightly.. n didn't retort back... 👍🏼

lolzzz... shivam is faulty piece afterall... not a family guy... silly idiot he isss... 😆

crap.. pakka tune vicky ka accident karwaya h... 😲

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

the chapter was superb... finally rey and kriya had their conversation had a lovely time...
and shivam had got a offer for rey... and told him he will read and decide then call him...
i hope neha family thus have not got into any problems... do continue soon and pm me

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

awesome...loved the rey handled kriya...ab neha ko kya hogaya???? update soon...

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Amazing...

i love the way u write...

waiting for next chappy..

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Lovely part...
Seriously each and every bit of it was enjoyable...
Iam loving dis phase of kriyaansh settling into new routine..
Rivaan is a sweet boy...
Uff!! Such clif hanger...
Wat's d news...hop everything is fine.