~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

it was lovely manu 🤗

starting from the early mrng scene... where he gets to witness the divine scene... the disguised shadow of unborn... 😃

great... he won the case already ... new house is lucky for him...

dessert in breakfast??? 😳 ... pata ni kya kya khate h... anyways anything can boost up desires in them ☺️

omg... they have talked abt it inchildhood itself... 2 innocent kids wanted to stay with each forever... n thats how how they are in love... awww

that 'pushing u on swings' is the most innocent n honest reason of love in childhood indeed... 👏

who knew life is much more complicated ... but what they thought is almost true... bas dog nhi h 😆

Ye krisha kya kya baatein karti hai... lol... poor rey... he's always the main subject of their gossips... 🤣

hawww... aise kaise khatam... pehle warn karna chahiye na... u better write some more parts... vaiae bhi kriya ki baby abhi born nhi hui .. 😛

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

first of all a question...

how do you manage to write chapters so fast.. that too so long...

i write very slowly... 🤔 please do give some tips.. 😆😆

now coming to the chapter..

it was really beautiful

but the best part was that they both have already talked about their future life in childhood...

like 2 kids.. playing ghar-ghar and want to get married when they grow elder.. 😆

so cute and innocent

and the reason you gave for their love 'pushing you on swings' made me fall in love

and what is wrong with kriya-sharon ?

they gossip all day long 😆

specially on their favorite topic... "REY"

loved the update

thanks for the PM

update soon and do PM me.. 😳 I AM WAITING...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

finally swayan and sharon decided to get married and all of them had
their great time spend it all together... amazing...
do continue soon and pm me

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

This is all so sweet..

I loved the entire thing.. the way they admire each other and all.. that was beautiful..

I like the bond between Kria and Sharon..

Yes it has a beautiful end like this as well...

and about writing more or ending it here.. depends on you.. You can write more 6-8 chapters but the question here is, do you want to write them?

because as a reader one can never be satisfied.. I would still ask for more of it then.. :P

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

amazing one

awesome

loved the convo b/w krisha

thanks for the pm

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senoritashweta

@senoritashweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Awesomme agaIN..!

I guess..m gonna be greedy..I love did story a lot..so do write MRE 6 to 8 parts..or even MRE than that..😛

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

that was such a perfect update...

love emotions friendship everything in one...

just loved the update...

i want you to continue this...😳

i would love to read more of this...

rest is up to you... (:

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

resd

unres

moi 1sttt

woww u r continuing ittt🥳

d update was sooo beautiful

wen i read d update i feel as if everything s happening n real

hats off to u for writing soo amazingly👏

awww rey s soo sweettt⭐️⭐️

he still remembers their 1st kiss☺️

and he's still a lil bit upset that he was not able to be wit kriya wen she was pregnant wit rivaan😳

and kriya shouted on rey cos of her harmonal stage

loveed d way rey handled d situation😊

and their romantic part aww

i wonder wat wil shivam's reaction wil b wen rey doesnt accept d offer😕

and wat was dat n d end😲

did something happen to vicky😲

waiting for d nxt part😊

and jus loveedd this updateee❤️

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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senoritashweta

@senoritashweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Awesomeee!! :-)

I soo much loved it...

Update soon :-)

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#280

superb..

loved it...

i got scared when kriya was in her dangerous ,mood..and saying that all things to rey...

but rey calmly handled it...

o god ab neha ki phone...now what will happen???

update it soon

with love

moumita

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