~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

apne comment ka size dekh..

mereko usse koi problem nhi hai...

par dekh toh sahi..

ekdum aisa shot maara ki seedhe toprated commenters mein aa gayi tu..: :* 🤣

PS: i wanted red not pinku... :(

Hahahahaha.. 🤣

Top rated 🤣

I have exams next month.. So me will be Zero rated then. :'(
.

And -___- Hey bhagwaaan Vaish. Yahan bhi red chahiye tereko.. Pinku se kaam chala le.. :* :*

Quote

-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

res

unres

okay without any bak bak and coming straight to the point

you are fabulous girl..

i mean now i have really tarted to admire the way you handle your stories.. 👏👏

they are simply perfect 👍🏼

each and every scene.. the dialogues.. and the coloring..

it might take like a life time to do all that coloring 😕😕

okay so this update was superb... just like always

i really can't say anything about it..

i am speechless...

lovely...

want an update soon

love reading this FF ❤️

thanks for the PM 😃

update soon 😳

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Incandescence.
Hahahahaha.. 🤣

Top rated 🤣

I have exams next month.. So me will be Zero rated then. :'(
.

And -___- Hey bhagwaaan Vaish. Yahan bhi red chahiye tereko.. Pinku se kaam chala le.. :* :*

obviously top rated the top notch comment of yours... :*

awww..

koi tereko zero rate nhi karega.. main hun nah.. ^_^

I LOUV red... ^_^

Quote

Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Wooowww! This is simply wonderful. Yeah. Anther one on the way. I just love the way you are handling this story. It's so beautiful and peaceful. Just outstanding. Continue soon.

Quote

dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

awesome...kriya is pregant...pls dont create problems between them...update soon...

Quote

Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Honestly mereko bilkul idea nai tha that yeh Rey k 'Over-possessive' hone ki reason ho sakti hai...

Though story mein iss baat par kafi discussion hui But mera dimaag chala he nai 😳...

The story like always is going Awesome 😃...

Rey's 'Over-Protective-ness' in everyway , har baat pe Kria ki health ka poocing , inna care karing , then Kriya ka surprise , Tarisha chipkli ko kya nikala Rey ne 😉 - Everything was just Ah-Mazing ...

N then 'The baby' , Ab toh Happiness he coming 😆...

Their life always take 360 degree k turns...

The part was Great N colourful bhi 👍🏼...

Loving the story ❤️...

N thanks for the pm 😊

Edited by Roxxy47 - 11 years ago

Quote

Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Awww... stop writing so sweet .. i'm getting diabetic...😃

Extra long tha na?? Mujhe installments me pura karna pada ...😆

But still.. then I didn't wanted it to end...😛

Kriya toh full bhukhad ho gyi hai... is it a symptom??? 😳

All her loved ones are so caring... rey ke orders nhi bhi honge... tab bhi ye aise hi dhyaan rakhenge...🤗

Wats wrong with lemon pie?? Itni heavy hoti h kya?? 😛

I didn't thought she'll fly back to him so soon... but its so good to feel the happiness when they meet... 😊

Ohh god... whose this?? movie ki actress??? Gals literally throw themselves on rey... wth 😡

But rey is a true lover... awww... i'm flattered... dude you rock...👏

Simply beautiful... their talks.. ur new ideas on their love moments... superb... 👍🏼

I'm loving rey's protectiveness... he stopped her twice from drinking... 😛

What??? She didn't knew at all?? Damn... she looks upset... 😲

Awesome chappy manu darls...😃

Quote

akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Its quite diffrnt frm ur all the other chappys, i personally felt dat...no doubt it was wndrful, spcly wen rey described y he loves hr so much...i love kria's emotional side always..
Bt i jst want 2 know..y is rey so hell bent on having another child so fast ? I mean dey already hv 1 so dey can wait 4 another until marriage..its eating up my brain..
Plz dnt feel bad 4 it di dat was jst a random thought