~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous as always

dere has to be a reson for rey saying all the time "be careful kria"

interesting precap

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Diii! 😃

OKAY! You never fail to leave me carving for more!🤢
The starting it self was so good, Kria and Sharon's conversations. I tell you, This Sharon, she is just so caring.. Like a true sister. Aww

And swayum too, he treats Rivaan like his own son, he plays with him, takes him to school, helps kria in so many ways..:) Swayum's character in every story is so 'understanding', its like that's how Swayum is, never changing, always caring, perfect friend, lover..and brother also as shown here, and I completely enjoyed reading KriYam caring moments, he cares for Kria so much! A perfect Brother-sister Love. ❤️

Kria planned it so perfectly, Neha will surely keep Rivaan fully busy 😉 and plus this meeting will bring Rey's parents closer to Rivaan, even more, After all Rivaan is their khandaan ka "Chiraag" 😆

And then came Our KR. Uff... HOT!, You know.. I just can't leave it saying it was HOT, I never felt it was HOT, because the way you show it na..I find is intensely emotional, connectable, INTENSE! This word completely defines their Love, Haina? As HOT to sunny leone bhi hai! LOL 🤣

WOW, I mean.. He knows here so well, Aww :'D Mera Rey! =]
He noticed the slight changes in her, and he was pretty sure that she is having his baby. Shit, Di I will end up becoming a emotional freak one day! 😆😉 But still, I so wanna be a one.

And his sayings, how much he had adored her from the start, their love isn't ordinary, its beyond physical boundaries.

They had some quality time together. =] Awww And after it.. I was left breathless for a second when he says he wan'ts her to ravish him.. EEeps! That moment was a full power boost up moment LOL...

And the biggest thing! YAYYY
They gonna have a second baby! Wohooo!

Song you added was so freaking Awesome! ❤️
And btw, I just missed one thing, Trisha🤢 LOL uska Popat ho gaya! 🤣 Yess! 😉


Love you lots Di.

Keep giving Lambe Lambe updates :D Do update soon =]

And 😆 Sorry, I am usually hyper active while commenting, so I usually miss the order. 😆 And I just realized that I was reading updates without any PM notifications, though there is no need But still Log kya sochenge 🤣 ,Pm me too (Formality😳)



Love you! 🤗

-Uppi

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Edited by Incandescence. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
what to say dear... it is freaking awsome...
just loved it to the core...🤗

i was missing kriyam very much...
after reading about them...i am happy now...
😃
the kriyaansh moments were majical.. ❤️☺️

each and everything is described so well..⭐️

i just fell in love with this ff..🤗

thnks a lot for the pm...
update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
loved it...
kriya is pregnant and rey found out before her😆

if only guys were this considerate in real life..😆

continue soon😃
Edited by ARMANTHEBEST - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
awsome update...
luvd it...
kriya were gud...
nd kriyansh they were as always amazing...
thankx 4 pm
update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Awesome...
As the end comes closer i want to read more of it...
Sharon is so good. Perfect frd
aww..love this swayam.
He loves rivaan so much.
Take care of his every need.
He cares for kriya...
Becoming protective for her.
Kriyaansh uff!! They r just irresistable.
Loved it whn rey entioned how he feel in love eith in skl times.
Kr are hot yet emotional.
Rey's love is above physical boundaries.
He knows her more than her.
He keep on every minute details.
She has been eating a lot...
Waiting for the new babay
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
wowww nia👍🏼
kria surprising rey😊
rey's convo wit dat girl (i forgot her name😛)was niceee😊
so kria s pregnant again😳
and rey's damn caringgg
loveedd this update very much❤️
as always amazingly written😉
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Wonderful Update Mannu...
You always have the tact to kep readers hooked up to your story..
Sharon and Kriya convo was at its best...
I loved the way Rivaan shares his bond with everyone around..
and Kriya going to Mumbai for Rey..He sure makes her heart go far beyond flying..
And the way Rey spoke with Trinsha was amazingly written..
and the little time spent alone ha it was best and Rey's doubt is about to come true...
:)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
wow kriyam moment

luv it

kriyaansh always fab

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Mannu!! uff that was a master piece.
I loved each and every bit from the start.

and seriously call me dumb. I never realised till she realised that she was pregnant!! 😆

I am in soo much with this Rey!!

How can he be such a perfect dreamboy?

I hate you mannu you are making me raise by hopes for my dreamboy!!😛

I am in soo much love with this God!!

I love this !!

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