~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

awesome update

kriyaansh moments are magical

each and everything is described so well

i just loved it

thanks for the pm

and update soon

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shakz_KR

@shakz_KR

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

i guess right kriya is pregnant
rey is so pampering her like a baby
i luv d kriyam relation
just luvd it
wauh
awesome

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Amazing update...

Krisha convo was too good.. sharon is so caring..

Loved Kriyam's bond.. brother sister..

Trisha ka popat hua .. haha lol 😆

rey knows kriya more than herself... aww loved it.

Kriyaansh were too hot .. 😳

update soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

that was a fabulous and mind blowing chapter ... loved it...
and some doubt are about to came true...
do continue soon and pm me

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Nice update
love it
kR moment was awsome

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

it was freaking awesome...loved it

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: magical_mania
Plus special shouts to Vaishu, Upi, Yogu, shenz and Aku. You guys never disappoint me. 😃

Uppu se... you and me in same color... ^_^

And so not fair... Uppu ke ek comment ne hum sabko complex e diya... jalve uppu.. :*

coming to the update...

I mean how do you write di? don't say by typing... -_-

i mean u just change the scene in a jiffy...

sweet to romantic to intense to sexy to caring..

I mean i really loved the wya you showed the entire scene...

as to how rey sensed it and everything..

that was just so amazing..

I really love the way how you fragment them being lovers and parents..

the balance is well maintained..

they rekindled their love.

but that doesn't mess their priorities..

It is such a beautiful read...

I really love how you fragment the dialogue exchange and the reactions..

it is so soothing..

beautifully written...

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Firstly coming to yoir A/N.. haha.. well..that was really veryyy sweet of u darling.. 😃

u keep writing and will never dissapoint u.. 😉

Anyways coming to this.. well..it was lovelyyy..

Loved the Kriyam part in Mid.. it was extremely sweet.. I've alwayss been in Love with Kriyam bonding..simple..yet sweet.. 😃

Moving on.. I love Rey for being sooo loyal to her..even in her absence.. well..atleast for him she was not der.. 😆

poor soul..he thought he was hallucinating.. 😆

and aftr that all the KR sweet emotional hawt moments.. haayyyeee.. me dead... 😳

Loveddd eettt Mania... 😃

awesomeee chappy... 🤗

P.S. - Plz kripya karke ab KR AT pe bhi apne darshan dene shuru kare.. KR coming back...

atleast now to u can get active yar..

maza aayega... 😃

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

@Vaish 🤣
Dono Pinkuu Pinkuu ❤️

Hahaahah And this would be first time in history ki Kisi Fiction pe comment karne mai Vaish ko kisi ne complex feel karwaya :$ Hayeee..
:*

Edited by Incandescence. - 11 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Incandescence.
@Vaish 🤣
Dono Pinkuu Pinkuu ❤️

Hahaahah And this would be first time in history ki Kisi Fiction pe comment karne mai Vaish ko kisi ne complex feel karwaya :$ Hayeee..
:*

apne comment ka size dekh..

mereko usse koi problem nhi hai...

par dekh toh sahi..

ekdum aisa shot maara ki seedhe toprated commenters mein aa gayi tu..: :* 🤣

PS: i wanted red not pinku... :(