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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: -Mitra
I don't have much written and posted here. For now, the only active ones are Mudra and Anthapura.

Don't go by the forums they are posted in, my stories are my own and have nothing to do with the soap characters.

Thanks for the links ... would really love to read these stories ...

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321abc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Interesting info revealed in Ch. 13 that Arnav's cousins are his step-brothers and I wonder if khushi will tell vishwa this truth and discuss if vishwa knows the actual story behind arnavs fathers death and step mom. I cant wait to read more :)

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Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

I am glad you are still updating as I do look forward to your updates. Does Shyama now know something that Arjun does not know? How will she live with this little tidbit that is so important for him to know? Again I don't know anything about the Mahabharata but I feel this conversation is somewhat going to be important later on in your story. Do the women know of Vishwas' intention about these 2?

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seshatree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

i started reading your story today...amazing writing...continue soon..

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: Raila1014
I am glad you are still updating as I do look forward to your updates. Does Shyama now know something that Arjun does not know? How will she live with this little tidbit that is so important for him to know? Again I don't know anything about the Mahabharata but I feel this conversation is somewhat going to be important later on in your story. Do the women know of Vishwas' intention about these 2?

You know, its good that you don't know the story, but you are right in the fact that it was an important conversation. Others who have read the story will already know when this secret will play out, but you just sit tight until then ;)

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Me too..will be waiting for this piece of information...to be revealed at some point ...

Loving every update...just awesome!

Thanks for updating...

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Pre-cap

"What's gotten into him tonight?" Nivedh mumbled making a face and sat back at the kitchen table. By then he'd left without an interest in the goings on of his living room.

Vishwa came to stand by the window where I'd stood the entire time. "How true?," he said taking a sip out of his beer bottle, "and, if I know any better, then he's been delivered from his guiles..."

I didn't like that Vishwa had taken to his taunts and my eyes shot him a disapproving look.

However, it only did goad him further, for he dipped to whisper into my ear. "Only to fall for another bewitchment..."

Edited by -Mitra - 11 years ago

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: -Mitra
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"What's gotten into him tonight?" Nivedh mumbled making a face and sat back at the kitchen table. By then he'd left without an interest in the goings on of his living room.

Vishwa came to stand by the window where I'd stood the entire time. "How true?," he said taking a sip out of his beer bottle, "and, if I know any better, then he's been delivered from his guiles..."

I didn't like that Vishwa had taken to his taunts and my eyes shot him a disapproving look.

However, it only did goad him further, for he dipped to whisper into my ear. "Only to fall for another bewitchment..."

Who is Nivedh ? So Vishwa has a habit of being sarcastic and taunting ... To whom ?

Thanks for a precap ...

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago