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Posted: 11 years ago

I was wondering how you would use Kunti's words of sharing the "thing" amongst themselves and you did not surprise me, reason being I did expect you to do a fair job of placing it in the story.

Would Shyama be comfortable in such an environment? Time will tell, then again, Vishwa thinks of the whole Arjun and Shyama alliance to be a good one.

Dhri and Shyama are so different; you show it in many ways...the thing about siblings is so heart-warming.

Communal riots is an unfortunate reality of our country, we have no way to escape it. This is getting interesting with each update.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 10 - Stories - It seemed as though the universe had planned it all to make them spend more time together ... 😃

I liked the ease with which they opened up to each other ... sharing small small details about their homes and lives ... his views on marriage which he willingly discloses to her ...

What surprises me is as to why the older brothers are not yet married ...

The bit about the drama in school was absolutely hilarious ... shows that he is ready to even kill to keep the girl in his life happy and content ... 😆

"Why scale the seas and fight a long winded battle, an epic one at that only

to banish Sita to the forest?" totally agree with his views ... 👏

Chapter 11 - Eclipse -

"Don't mind me, but I really do have to get us home." His voice came from behind me, however least did it give me the inkling that I would go down...
into his arms... 😳 but even in the midst of their arguement they had to clarify their names ... when she called him Arnav he corrected her with Arjun ... 😆 the incorrigible two ...
thank God for the timely arrival of Dhri and Vishwa ... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are a brialliant writer. Not just the writing but the way you have associated the historical and the new world. Love your thought process and your grasp with the situations with both the worlds. Looking forward to this journey thru the story. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

It is never easy to accept another woman's child and Khyati has done that, it is admirable indeed. On the other hand she also plagued with guilt for not caring for "him" and I felt bad for Aditya Karan all over again.

Nilofer Bi is a strong support for Khyati and I must say a good advisor too. Do these women know, Vishwa wants Shyama to marry Arjun? Given the fact his elder brothers are not so keen on the institution.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow, since Adithya cannot be born to Khyati as a boon, it will be interesting to see who his father is... My oh my...

And the poor little eavesdropper. I would hate to b in her situation... (not because I don't enjoy hearing other people's secrets and gossiping about them later, but because I cannot pretend to sleep so well😆 😛 )

It is still unclear if Arjun, Yuvi and Dev know that Nivedh and Sahasra are their step brothers... Is that to be understood and left alone, or do you plan to use it later? I know, a useless question... I will wait to read more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
On my earlier comments, I am amazed at the way you are trying to connect up the epic to these modern times. I will read anything you write and enjoy it without doubt. But I also know you have a very deep understanding and vision of your own characters and the different shades they exhibit. It is always fun to try and understand your vision of these characters and I hence like to challenge you on some of their behaviors 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Can I have all your stories index link?

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! the last three chapters were AMAZING! Loving how you are incorporating all the details!!! Can't wait to read next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't have much written and posted here. For now, the only active ones are Mudra and Anthapura.

Don't go by the forums they are posted in, my stories are my own and have nothing to do with the soap characters.

Edited by -Mitra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
How will Shyama adjust to this completely different household? I think this unintentional eavesdropping will prepare Shyama to help Khyati manage the house and eventually taking it over.
And sharing the thing among themselves without breaking, why were the women talking about it? It was just Khyati's presumption, I'm intrigued of its consequences.
Khyati is a strong and great woman, to accept others child as her own and of course she still feels bad for her Aditya.. a true motherly soul. In this scenario, I wonder who is his father? Nilofer bi is a great support to her. Are they aware of Vishwa's plan? What are their reactions?
It is as fantastic as the others and I'm eager to read more :)

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