Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: shree10
Thanks for long update and pm.

Now why why that ba...rd Shyam is out?? As it is Arnav and Khushi had a canyon of problems to deal with and now Shyam too? Or he will be a catalyst for bringing them closer??

If not then pls pls somebody make him vanish for ever in LB, pls.

And Aria please come back sooner with next update.

Cause they can't keep in jail forever 😆 and he's too slimy not to want revenge for jail time!

Don't worry, its more like a guest appearance here, he won't be here for too long.

I'm sorry, I've been struck with a series of problems and now at the end of it, struck with a terrible writer's block. will try and update soonish, even if its a small one just to get back into this.

Thanks Shree :)

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
Lovely update aria - a lengthy one indeed good to see u back after a long time - great update dear

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Dimz13
Now they are both on familiar ground a common enemy to fight ..someone with a face and a name. Seems to have come full circle..they parted because of Shyam and now I hope because of him they will come together.
Kushi has always managed to draw out the best and the worst part of Arnav..here's hoping that Che can draw him out into the light and dispel the shadows and darkness around hi and his heart.

Little ms Italian chef is finally getting in the groove. Here's to more exciting time and some fiery speaks flying between the chef and the person for whom she learnt to cook Italian food.

@bold, you speak wisely. In a way, Shyam has always brought them closer, even the hate marriage was cause of him😆 if you look at it that way.

He needs her thats for sure. Let's see if Khushi has it in her to forgive.

Thanks a lot.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: serendipitylove
Loved this update aria 😃 loooved how Arnav just cant keep his hands off her..he reaches out to touch her or hold her again and again...holding her firm to himself even while she struggles and yes I noticed, his grip although firm, is gentle now.. Unlike in d past where it always left marks and bruises on her...
While the touching, holding and the proximity and romantic tension is thrilling... he still needs to work hard to redeem himself..
She shouldnt let him be forgiven so easily... All the hurt n pain he caused can't possibly be forgotten in a couple of days...I wish Khushi hadnt taken back the 300 Rs...

Nevertheless, i'm still excited at the everything that this night of Arnav and Khushi alone in an apartment has in store... 😉😆

Hi there,

yeah, 😆

redeem? he is trying his best. still needs more work? may be khushi will go easy on him? i mean whats the difference between khushi and arnav then? if she keeps on wanting him to suffer the same way?

yeah, the night is still young😛

Thank you for your comment!

Originally posted by: ayaman
lovely update

Thank you!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Congrats on the new thread, hope this amazing story is blessed with many more.

The update was absolutely amazing and simply fantastic.

The conversation between Arnav and Khushi was as expected quite intense and emotional.

I think Arnav should be prepared for the cold and short replies from Khushi, he does deserve that.

By the way I must admit you have portrayed both there characters perfectly and wrote there emotions and feelings exceptionally well.

So Aman has disclosed that it's not Lavanya behind the media trouble and both Arnav and Khushi have realised it might be Shyam.

I can't believe Shyam has been released from jail, hope he does not hurt Khushi.

I don't know why but I get the feeling it might not be Shyam because why would he want photos of Khushi and raul, or were the photos only suppose to be of Khushi.

The last part was nice Arnav trying to wind up Khushi just so that he could see his old feisty Khushi back.

Loved the update it was a fantastic read from start to finish,

Thanks for the PM,

Continue soon, eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Well, there will be bits of Lavanya and Shyam in this story but the focus is not on them. they are more like back ground players...if you will. I certainly want to focus on AK. And its got to a point where it will have to focus on them too.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading the update. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, loved it as always.

Cheers!

Originally posted by: msmarple
enjoyed the update.
Thanks for the PM

Thank you, glad to know you liked it.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

when is the next update aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: rabid52
Really nice update. I like the intellectual unravelling of their story. I liked the part when Arnav said, that you called me that's why I came. Nice to see Arnav still able to understand Khushi.
Liked the way he flicks her nose and the way he can always rile her up 😛

Shyam in the vicinity😡

@bold, yes. in a way he was correct there. she was testing waters and he has responded, now its her turn. What does she want? she needs to figure that out, but first, he needs to let her know what he is up to.

Glad to know, you enjoyed reading the update. Thank you for your comment.

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1
nice update...

loved ARHI arguments,we can not get enough of it😉...liked it the way u written intense and fun, its been 3 yrs they are seperated,but the love and care they had with each other,the way u written i loved it...kushi's questions, arnav loss of words...loved the way arnav told u called me remember...hoping soon they will talk..kushi will give arnav a chance to explain...

so now lavanya is the one who relesed arnav and her the tabloid photos and all...i can not believe lavanya is doing all these ,i guess may be anjali asked lavanya to do all these things if kushi wants to move on ...oh god that creep shyam is out and stalking kushi,thank god arnav is there with kushi on time...

arnav is trying bring kushi back...he loves her sooo much...can not wait to read more now the game begins...

thank u for the update and pm...

cheers...

yeah, somehow thats AK for me. they can't help it when it comes to the other. and with all that which is unresolved between them, it only gets better😳

she will have to listen now that he has her at his place...with shyam on the prowl.

Thank you for your comment, will try and update soon!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
when is the next update aria

As soon as I can. I'm kind of struck with a terrible writer's block, assuming there is such a thing. I will try and post a small update to get back into things.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: toeditor
Just found the ff and read it one go...very nicely being written, keep up the good work...look forward for the next updAte...do pm me plz

Welcome to the LB thread! Thank you for commenting. Glad to know you have enjoyed reading the updates so far.

Originally posted by: Raila1014
Thanks for the PM - much appreciated. Great argument between them, the table was reversed and she was the aggressor and he was trying to get through. It does not feel good to be on the hurting side, does it Arnavji? I love the way you made him reply to why he could not leave her alone (you called for me and here I am) - that was beautifully done. Shut her up! Now here comes the snake again, that man is so vile. Ugh! Why was he not put away for longer? Do they not know what he did to Sashi and Anjali? Love his teasing at the end, he always managed to get under her skin like she did with him. Please don't take too long to update!

Hi there, You are welcome! Well its about time, he got some taste of his own medicine. But one thing is for sure, more he sees this Khushi, he will try harder. He will think of a way to bring her close. like using that money thing against her, he was speaking the truth in a way there.

Why was he not put away longer? guess thats all he was sentenced for. dont worry, shyam wont be here for too long. Nope they do not know what he did to sashi. Anjali yes. I'm sorry, the next update has been delayed for so long, will try and post a small update one of these days.

Thank you!

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kurinji

@kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Got the link from recommended best redumption FF.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: shana123
Definitely worth the wait! Its getting better
and better by the update! Looking forward
To frequent updates though. Superb!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
nice

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ruark_22
Great update!!! So shyam the snake returns!!! Loved the conversation and Khushi's stand. Also Arnav's reaction is so bang on with his personality shown in IPKKND!!! Waiting for the next update!!

Snake returns but this time, Arnav is better prepared ;) Thank you!

Originally posted by: akaps
Enjoyed the update.

Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
Jus read the ff in one go. A great redemption track. Really nice. Looking forward to ur next update

Welcome to the thread. Thank you for your comment :)

Originally posted by: yashal_khan
it was awsumm chapter if its not lavnaya then who is doing that ????
continue soon
thanks for pm

For now, everything points towards Lavanya. But the Snake is back ;)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: gifttag
First of all congrats on the new thread.

Wow what an update, simply awesome.
I agree with Arnav when he said I am here because you called me, she is dealing with ASR, has she forgotten that, a shatir dimak. He will soon click why Khushi has chosen Italian cuisine and not any other but at the moment he is trying to distract her and getting her respond to him the way she used to by falling for the bait and get caught in the net, and she did.. beautifully. Hopefully the banter will continue in the next chapter as that was sooo heartwarming to read.

Shyam is around and stalking Khushi and that sounds ominous and I hope that Arnav don't listen to Khushi at all and compromise with her safety as he is trying not to be Arnav he used to be before Shyam fiasco, and La? Khushi is right to be surprised and finding it unbelievable as she is the one told her in a round about way about Arnav's feelings towards her.

They have lots of ground to cover still but the process has started and it will take a lot of time and patience on Arnav's part but he is determined not to let her go as he has found her after three long years of search and going through so much pain.

Loved the chapter and their conversation and could feel lot of struggle, pain, heartbreak and insecurity from both their side with Khushi's denial to feel anything and Arnav's acceptance to feel too much and trying to get Khushi to accept it too and then move on to bridge the gap, which will not an easy thing to do and will need lots of patience. Lets see how this comes about.

Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

I want to remind you that I will be inactive on IF for a month now as I am travelling so won't be able to comment but pls don't remove me from your PM list.

Hi there, the shatir dimag hasn't always been as shatir though has it? ;) even though in this case, he did manage to silence her. it has failed him too at times. Yup, they are not done yet!

there is so much for them to go through and yet they keep struggling with the same thing. no way they are getting anywhere without talking about what went wrong, hopefully they will, the night is still young ;)

Thank you for commenting

You haven't missed much, nearly a month since I updated last 😆