Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
This conversation was long due but i'm glad finally they talked.
Even though they both were high on emotions but it's a start and it's not over yet.
They need to find a closure.

Khushi is so naive even after everything she has been though.
Hopefully he will take care of her and keep her away from trouble.

Its certainly not over yet ;)

He will make sure she is safe now.

Originally posted by: Greyars
Love it
Please update and pm

Thank you. Will try and update soon :)

Originally posted by: Onlooker
Congrats on the new thread..
Shyam is behind Kushi?! Will it bring Arnav and her together..?

Shyam is certainly back. Let's see if he brings them together ;)

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: -Aria-
Hi Hina, you guys probably think I've abandoned this FF by now But because of the gap, I've been struggling to get back into this whole thing. I will try and update soon, even if its a small update. Just a little bit more wait.😳

Oh Ok😛

I shall wait for it then😳

Hope it comes soon😉

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: RandomGirl
Nice update..

Thank you RG :)

Originally posted by: mklam
Learnt something interesting about liquorice and wanted to share wtih you. The ayurvedic medicine that I use for cough/sore throat has this ingredient - we call it "adhimanthiram" and this is liquorice in English! It has a pungent taste in the beginning yet there's a hint of sweetness after you've had it - i know that doesn't make much sense but you get a flavour of more than one taste. (This powder is mixed with honey before taking it).
Your heroine certainly reminds me of all this and more - a bite of KKGSR and the sweetness of Khushi...all in one shot!

Thats an interesting bit of information. I was not aware of it. Thank your for sharing it here.

Who would have thought someone would make this connection. You know, I would love to know what Arnav would say to this. He's been getting more of the bite of late.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: harshdb
I loved the last line frm part 22.

pls continue soon

😊

Will try and update soon.

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: sonia_92
shyam is back? Crap... but khushi seems better.

Yes, he is.

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Amazin story

Welcome to the LB thread Tina and Thank you :)

Originally posted by: tinsel
Fantastic update👏

Thank you Tinsel :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Khuarv
Finally finished all the updates.Each update is
unravelling a few sinister secrets.
Khushi's shock at knowing lavanya was behind a
few of the press leaks was totally khushi Kumari
Gupta. So shyam is back. Just loved the ending
where Arnav and khushi are bickering like kids.
That's one thing which will never change between them.
Eagerly waiting for your next update. Would you mind
sending a pm? Buddy request on it's way 😃 .

Hi there, Yes the way they parted, its obviously hard for Khushi to accept that Lavanaya who let him go so easily would be doing all this behind his back. May be her intuition is correct despite what all the evidence points to? Lets see how that goes. Thank you for commenting on all the updates that was really sweet of you. It was a pleasure to read and respond to too. Thank you!

Originally posted by: arhi-raizada
nice plz add me to ur pm list 😳

I will PM you when I update next. But unfortunately I do not keep an updated PM list. Just PM the people who have commented on the last two updates. Do read the first page of this thread for more info on that. Thank you!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: .Boss.
Still no update? 😔 *puppy eyes* pretty please update? Lets try to bribe you with Sobti's pic: Hope that would show effective results!

Just look at those chocolaty depths. I am dead.🤢 ❤️

😆

This is more of a good distraction than an bribe...now don't you think?😳

Now that you have posted this pic here, I just want Khushi to see this... may be she'd forgive him quicker😆

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: guptaaesha
Amazing story.I came to know about it from hina di,as it is her favourite too :)
slowly,gradually u opened so many secretes behind khushi's disappearance
Nicely portrayed about arnav's di and akash taking khushi's side and helping her,their honesty towards khushi,their helplessness about the things happened in past 3 yrs.
Arnav's guilt,sorrow,his broken state behind that strong mask
And khushi's battle between heart and brain :(
3 yrs are definitely too much for any couple to live without each other with so many questions,so much emotions all the while,pain,guilt,hatred,love,memories of good times and those dark times when they married that night
U really described their emotions very well,like they met after 3 yrs,that too without any hint,they didn't know how to react,their changed behavior and him trying to be more soft,patient to handle things in a right way this time
And her trying to be indifferent toward things,toward his reactions,softness,honesty
Hats off 😊

Hi Aesha, Welcome to the LB thread. Yes, just all those little things I had hoped they would go into the actual show...meshed into one. Three years is a long time and there is so much unresolved between them... they would have been miserable without a proper closure, either way.

Thank you for your wonderful comment. Hope to hear more from you.

Thank you Hina for the recommendation :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: crazymg.04
loving the story👏

Thank you crazymg :)

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
Congrats on the new thread!

I'm so glad to have come across this amazing story which just made me smile now

You wrote so beautifully & made me tear up a lot of times too

I love this story keep writing more!

Hi LyssaPie, Welcome to the LB thread. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the story, always nice to hear from new readers.

Thanks again!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: Japonica
At last I found the time to go back to the update, to reread it before commenting on it.

It is amazing isn't it how far they've gone away from each and yet have gone nowhere where each other is concerned. Both are wrecks of their originals and yet at the centre of the wreck their hearts beat for each other.

The only way to salvage the wrecks is for Khushi to demand answers from him for treating her so badly and for him to tell her, to acknowledge the hurt he has caused her.

But then hurrah, Shyam, the creep is back, for that will only serve to bring them back together as the only way to defeat him is for them to be united.

Hi there L, I'd like to think, with these two even on the show, it wouldn't have been any different had there been a separation of some sort. They wouldn't get anywhere... I love that bold bit there.

Yes, its time for that talk, no escaping it anymore. They won't resolve anything without talking now. Or they could just decide to kiss their way out of this mess...😆

Thanks L.

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Hi there L, I'd like to think, with these two even on the show, it wouldn't have been any different had there been a separation of some sort. They wouldn't get anywhere... I love that bold bit there.

Yes, its time for that talk, no escaping it anymore. They won't resolve anything without talking now. Or they could just decide to kiss their way out of this mess...😆

Thanks L.

Oh just let them kiss their way out of this making love to each other. Verbal language falls far short of the language of love. That would be perfect, they've suffered so much.