Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: FLGirl
So good to see an update from you and this one was certainly another good one. I loved how Kushi was tough and did not give in to him immediately. I want Arnav to beg harder before she relents. The creep is back. He has not even made an entrance in the story and look he already made a big impact. I wish the reason she chose to be an Italian chef is because Arnav loves it. I want to see Arnav's reaction to that.
Cant wait for your next update. Thanks for the PM and congrats on the new thread. Please update soon

But does it make her any better if she wishes him to repent more? Or is forgiveness better?

Yeah well, I was in two minds initially about the creep but he will be here for a short while, more of a shadowy figure that wrecked havoc in their lives. I'd rather focus on AK from now on :)

You said it, there is only one reason why she chose to be an Italian chef, may be she doesn't have to look too far to find out what or whom she still wants. He will find out 😳

Thank you FLGirl. I will try and update soon.

Originally posted by: Prachi..
awesome ff
i loved the update
thanks for the pm
continue soon

Thank you Prachi, I will try and update soon :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: meem17
Awesome update

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: manikka
awesome update dear...
looks like shyam is back and on the way to track down khushi...well it has to be there...if arnav could search her thn why not tis bad guy...??...another twist...loved it...

good shot for khushi...she answered back arnav...who must be beyond shocking states seeing khushi giving his a mouthful of answers...

thnks for the PM dear...

Exactly, or may be Khushi just happened to be at the wrong place at the wrong time?

Originally posted by: koisk
Awesome and Arnav's ways are paying to get khushi back.

It was bound to happen ;)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: angeldream14
awesome
he is fool cant he just see she learn italian food as he loves it

u can u mad at ur love but ur heart can never stop loving them

is the snake stalking her

lol yea, its quite simple. if only. not much to think about there.

yes, apparently, the snake is back to stalking.

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Of course, Khushi learnt Italian cooking because Arnav is very fond of Italian food!
And Lavanya is so mean!
She got articles printed on Arnav to take revenge on him?
And now Shyam is back in the picture.
Hope Arnav gives him his just dues.
Interesting update, Aria.

Hi there, yes the past is still haunting them and then there are shyam and lavanya to add to their woes.

Originally posted by: savy.fernis
Amazingly written

Thanks Savy :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: piyaarshi
Awsum update... Liked d end of dis part

Thank you Piya :)

Originally posted by: Serene77
lovely update:) finally kkgsr is back.. good for asr... shyam is back? that's a good twist. i hope arshi work together against shyam and in this process get closer to each other.. some romance pl? although i think arnav should be groveling for all that he put her thru, poor guy needs a break;)
loving ur work.

Hi Serene, yep kkgsr is back and about time too. So then how could shyam be left behind?

@bold. lol. I couldn't agree more, why just him. both of them need some TLC.😳😉

Thank you for commenting :)

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: -Aria-

As soon as I can. I'm kind of struck with a terrible writer's block, assuming there is such a thing. I will try and post a small update to get back into things.

thx aria

will wait for ur small update dear

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: NiksAngel
Wow...its been ages since i read this fiction...have read all parts again...n must say...i do regret not following up nw...!!!

Awww. Thank you!😳

Originally posted by: prati_incept

awesome update...

I first thought he was bluffing.. but looks like she really is in trouble..
hope the mighty ASR handles the villain smartly this time and keep her safe..

La? really..
even if she did.. I doubt she has sinister motive behind it..

and as he said.. welcome back Mrs KKGSR...

waiting for more...

Hi there, nope, he is not bluffing. trouble is certainly here, in the form of the snake. but arnav is better prepared this time, or at least he should be.

Welcome back KKGSR indeed ;)

Thank you for commenting :)

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

when will u update dear? I am eagerly waiting

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Hugs A! You OK?

Happy Diwali Prasanthi :)

Hugs to you too. 🤗

Much better now. Thank you!

Originally posted by: Hina69
when will u update dear? I am eagerly waiting

Hi Hina, you guys probably think I've abandoned this FF by now But because of the gap, I've been struggling to get back into this whole thing. I will try and update soon, even if its a small update. Just a little bit more wait.😳

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Sheetalmjk
...Waiting for update

Thank you Sheetal :)

Originally posted by: Viji79
Congrats on the new thread! The manager should have got more from arnav. But that's not the issue in hand and it is much more serious. This is becoming very interesting withe very update. Sorry I haven't comment for the last few updates. I will certainly do regularly rom now on.

Hi Viji, Thank you! Arnav is trying to be cautious of not forcing anything upon Khushi. Just imagine, if he had dealt with the manager more severely, with the press at his back - khushi may not have had a choice to make. No worries about the comment, just write in when you can. :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: dreamymaya
Return of shyam is quite unnerving but if Raizada could bring back old Khushi I am in :-) interesting twist of events...

To be honest, I want to write about the old Khushi too. Writing on these two when they've been so down, is not fun all the time. I miss the old Khushi too :(

Thank you Maya for your comment :)

Originally posted by: Amanram
Loved the update, khushi's surprise at Arnav's behaviour, Arnav's emotions. Gosh it always boils down to the proverbial Shyam - doesn't. He always seems to making or breaking Arshi relationship! I hope Arshi work together to finish him once and for all and they can find their peace with each other after .

Ps - thanks for the pm

Glad you liked the update. It does. He was the one who set the dominoes into effect and so it can't end without him, can it? Thank you for commenting :)