VirMan Collab FF: Hum Jo Chalne Lage - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOOOW..!!
Started off amaaazingly..!! ;)
update soon nd do pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome...loved their 1st encounter...cont soon n thx fr the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds interesting

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank You all for your lovely comments. The first part will be up tomorrow or after hopefully. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing story 👏 update soon please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1


"Maybe the name simply won't do any good, I will give you a full introduction of me. What say? You know right, I am bored!!", She said pouting, I must say she looked cute. But the problem was that she ,in no way was ready to leave me alone. Showing no interest, I put the earphones back which was of no use because she pulled them down back and started her non-stop chatter again.

"I am Manvi Chaudary from the beautiful town of Hrishikesh. I am now going to my Di's Sasuraal. My Beeji told me hundred times not to go alone, but you know what? I am such a courageous girl that I can go anywhere alone. Really!!", she said sitting more straightly indicating pride which literally made me laugh.

"My family consists of my badi beeji, beeji, mom, dad, chachu, chachi, dabbu, my cousin brother and my dear di who is now married. We all love each other so much." She said all in one breath and breathed once deeply, I thought the introduction was over but it never was. She started off again, Arghh!!

"My favourite hero is Hrithik Roshan. I really love him. He is just too handsome that he makes me blush." She stated sending a flying kiss to the blank air. Was she mad?

"I don't like a specific heroine because no one looks beautiful like me.", she said flicking her eyelids and boasting herself.

Her shrilling sound was irritating me too much so I put on the earphones back but she pulled them down again. I just wanted to kill her!

"Now an introduction of yours will do?", she said making herself more comfortable on the seat as if she was going to listen to a bedtime story.

I was already fed up and in no way was I going to expose my details to her. So I just turned my head onto the other side and stared out of the windows into loneliness, putting my earphones on. The scene outside was beautiful with the blue blank sky on the top and clear green fields at the bottom. The melodious music soothed my ears.

I was surprised that she didn't pull my ear phones down again. I guess she was murmuring something to herself. After some moments of peace, she came and sat on the seat opposite to me and started faking sobs seeking my attention. This time, I pulled my earphones down myself. Her face glowed suddenly and she asked in enthusiasm, "So will you tell me about yourself?" I nodded in agreement and she leaned forward smiling.

"I have a dad, mom, sister, brother, chachi, chacha, maasi, maasa, dada, dadi, nana, nani, bhabhi..", I noticed her mouth widening by my each and every word, I continued, "But the only problem is that everyone remain only in my dreams. I am an orphan." I said with no specific emotions but I saw a trace of sympathy on her face. There were moments of silence and she started again, "Ohh! That's really sad.."

I cut her and stated, "No, that isn't. Having relatives and not having relatives are same when it comes to death because all of us are going to leave from here alone only. And one day all of us are supposed to die."

She was amused and maybe inspired by my words that at once I saw a feeling of admiration on her face, then she said, "Kya Philosophy Hein!! Anyway leave that, but at least you must be having a love right?"

That question was the most irritating one and I was about to put my earphones back when she held my hand and requested, "Answer please?" She indeed looked cute.

"Yes, I have one." I said shaking her hands away from mine and putting the earphones back.

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Thanks alot for the comments guys, really means alot to us. Expecting the same and even better response in the future. The next update will be written by Stella.

Don't forget to comment and hit the like button.


Till next time,

Stella and Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Wow such a nice story..great beginning
Loved their conversation..manvi is so bubbly & cute here..they reminded me of jab we met my all time favourite movie..virat is an orphan..quite new & interesting..waiting for next part..do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update she so much talkative
and he get irritated from her and he is orphan
update soon and long one

Edited by pink1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love! It's always a problematic question!
. Chapter was short and sweet, I liked the way manvi was pulling his earphones out!! Haha anw good job and update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good update..but short one...
Manvi is so babli...she is so talkative...
Virat is so irritated with her nd orphan...
Plzzz update soon

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