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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Awesome..!! Liked Maanvi's Feelings towards Virat..which means he did strike a chord in her heart..yes it hard to choose the right in life..and Maanvi has landed in Virats home..Interesting..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM!

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jayanthi

@jayprabu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Nice update. Liked it very much.

Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Superb update!! <3 Manvi is in dilemma.. Does she really love Aditya?? It seems she only likes the idea of being in love with him.. But glad to know that she is not completely immune to Virat's charms.. He has some effect on her.. Loved the way you portrayed her thoughts.. Very nice.. Waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :)