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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#681

Pakhee, u r doing a commendable job...i'm in awe of ur writing skills...ur updates r always bang on...i liked d way u bonded khushi n payal...it was heart touching to see khushi finding solace in payal's warm embrace..hats off to u pakhee...n all d very best for ur interviews...thanks for updating...

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#682

Comment updated !

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#683

Awesome update...

I m feeling terrible for khushi... Her life is totally messed up... And now Arnav behavior torn her from inside...

I don't blame Arnav... whatever he saw alarmed him and the fact that he is over protective about his family didn't help either...

What is Akash and Sheetal up to??? What was the secret meeting about?? Also Arnav is investigating about khushi... I just hope this will not land khushi into another trouble giving Arnav hatred towards khushi Gupta...

Amidst of everything bad, I m glad that Payal came for Khushi... Loved her...

Continue soon...

PS.. All the best for your interviews... .:)

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ShwetapS

@ShwetapS

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#684

Hey P,

So when Khushi finally realised Arnav needs to be thanked for rescuing her our Arnav goes bonkers! When will this tu tu mein mein end? 😛

I understand A somewhere feels being cheated since they had recently started bonding as friends and it hurt him to know that she is keeping something from him, but I am sure he too has some secrets of his own that he is guarding, so I am hoping soon he will try and decipher this mystery of a girl. But what happens then? When he knows this is the same girl he has hated from childhood?

What happened to our responsible elder brother Akash here? Is he being blackmailed or is he a party to some mischief?

What a web of complications you have build P. you should be proud that u r throwing the readers off balance. That's what this genre needs... You r doing gr8. Just take a break and floor us with your twist and turns. 😉We will meanwhile try to crack the mystery or go crazy doing so!😛

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#685

What the hell just happened here ??? I am disappointed with Arnav , he went a tad bit far in throwing everything at her face.

From the day Khushi has landed in front of his doorstep he has been intrigued by her presence and also quite aware that there has been something holding her back atleast that's the impression i got and now after having gone through such a terrible episode of assault he is accusing her instead of trying to let her come to terms with. I do not agree with his reactions but also understand that it is very much in his character to react like this , he obviously has trust issues and is aggressive by nature.

I have a feeling he will regret his reactions later when he sits and thinks over.

NK's stance was quite a welcome change, finally he behaved like his namesake.

Khushi ..what do i say about her she is in the center of this whole vortex and definitely not by choice !

I felt so relieved to see Payal at her front door she definitely needs some sort of support at this point and if Payal can offer her that nothing like it.

Coming to Akash ...I wonder if he is laying a trap or getting into one !!

Looking forward to the next update eagerly !

About the note : You already know what are my opinions on the issue rest assured you are doing a wonderful job writing this story.

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#686

I really hope she tells payal everything.beautiful chapter.what is Akash doing with sheetal gupta??? another cliffhanger oh god survive all this suspense..

Dear u write so beautifully and this story is amazing with a brilliant concept do not lose confidence.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#687

Quite an emotional and happening chapter.

Even though they have not expressed themselves or are in a relationship that she needs to give explanations or justify her actions but some where there is a deep connection which they share.

Maybe that is why there is a sense of disbelief and hurt.

Khushi is on that situation where you realize the worth of something only when you lose it.

Arnav has very much become a part of her life.

Good to see Payal extending her the much needed support.

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Alannah

@Alannah

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#688

Amazing and an awesome update

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Niks

@NiksAngel

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#689

Oh My God...m so damn hooked to it from starting...its amazing...damn too many secrets...damn too many lies...i really didnt want this to end n i wish u update it everyday...cannot wait for next update...!!! Its killin