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sweetfairy007

@sweetfairy007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Hai Camlin,

I am a new reader.I am very happy that I saw your work and opened it to read your story.Your story is quite awesome I should say with a strong backbone.Your story is having suspense and there is a thrill to read your story.Arnav 's kiss is a little more dramatic...why such a impulse reaction seeing a beautiful girl...Anyway Khushi's blasting reaction is apt.Khushi's past and after maths are so intriguing.Bua's story I liked so much.The best way to communicate with kids is always stories...even for harsh truths...
What she has seen about Arnav in paper .?...I think outside her room Arnav and Shyam were standing.Khushi is strong and her character detailing by you is quite impressive.Waiting for your further updates...

Please add me to your buddy list, I will be thankful...

Ps:This is the first time i have come across your work.I hope your other stories will be also awesome

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mwep

@mwep

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

amazing update

now who is behind her?

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sruthick

@sruthick

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Awesome update.
Bt that was so short..
That part...Little Khushi asking bout her Ma...
I really felt bad 4 that kid...
I wondr wat did she saw in d newspaper...
Nd d last part... who were those people ??
Wat r they doin.??
Waitng 4 d nxt part...
Hope...U'll not 4gt 2 send me ur blog link...
Cntinue soon

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Shorty update

A baby's innocent question completely stirred up her bhua's mind!

That's so true that children live in their own world of fantasies. And when that is finally broken, you know that you're growing old. So I'll take it the way as khushi grew up, she understood that this was just an illusion, which people love to llive in, woven by her bhua who wanted to protect her! And at last, the only person she knew also died!

After all everything is illusion & death is the only reality!

Well I completely am with khushi for she is not trusting her father. Definitely who will when someone turns up on your door and tells you that I am ur father, believe me?

And I think its arnav & shyaam who have turned up on her door? Or do u have something else in store fr us?

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Brilliant update...
poor khushi was missing her mom so badly...
that part was quite emotional
i guess the people at the door were arnav and shyam...
Thnx fr pm

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nishkka

@nishkka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Loved yr update. Please buddy me. I would love to continue reading yr ff.This is the first time I am reading any of your stories. I find your writing style quite different from other writers.

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

res

unres!

my god!

he was making out with a girl?

in the freaking lobby?

but i thought i remember reading that arnav isnt into THAT kind of stuff?

that it was only shyam who was into that shit?

arnav!!!!

why? why would u do this?

you know what?

just whatever to him! i absolutely dont care what he does

he can merrily go to hell for all i care!

i loved anjali's character!

she seems AMAZING!

and im pretty sure shes going to have a good bonding with khushi, just getting a vibe!

i loved the bold, confident anjali!

just the opposite of the one we saw in the show and this one totally attracts me alot!

so shes like this illegimate child?

wow!!! this is all too much to take in right now!!

Khushi, my friend?

why dont u do something productive?

try to divert ur mind in some other way except googling the details of ur own father?

because for some reason, this isnt good for us!

who the hell is RANA SINGH now?

this is ur fault!!! if u hadnt been so curious about knowing ur father, we would not have been introducted to this new character!!

great!!!

just great!

u might be unfolding the story very beautifully but what the hell? whats ur love for new characters?

its like a one for one scheme!

i will open one secret and make a new character in exchange!!

now tell us about the article soon!!!

get me the next chapter soon, pleasee??

oh and this goes without saying!

LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!😳

Edited by cherrybloom1 - 11 years ago

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navjot7

@navjot7

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

nice updt
after reading ur previous chapter i thought arnavis not invlove in any kind of physicl relationship
because he refuse when shyam offer him
but now after reading this updt i am confuse again
thnx for pm
updt soon

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

I'm in a little hurry so here's a short comment:

Arnav is an A- class jerk , casanova, arrogant as*. Seriously! He was making out with a girl on terrace and had no decency to not flirt with Khushi while just some girl is right next to her!

He may be the down right sexy greek god specimen but he has attitude and style and arrogance making him the Bad Boy! He's a model for AR! Thats great!

Rana Singh, Anjali's father, Garima's killer..! Why did he kill her 18 yrs back? Why is he so after Khushi??.. Aman seems a nice charecter and a genuine person!

Waiting for the new entry and for the actual Fun to begin..

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madhuiyer

@madhuiyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Res

~unres~

The update was just awesome.
Arshi was very nice. Anjali reminded me of bipasha basu in dhoom 2. So the guy is Anjali's father. And he had actually raped Anjali's mom. That's horrible. I loved the way u have described CBI and interpol its makes u actually wish to live such lives of people helping to catch criminals.

Thanks for the update and pm.

Edited by madhuiyer - 11 years ago

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