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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

well to start update was amazing.. understood khushi's loss.. she didn't had her mother but she had her bua who gave her motherly love but now she have lost her.. not only that earlier she have not seen her parents so she had made her own images but after seeing her mother's photographs she very much face to face to reality that there was Garima Muriel who was her mother... she have taken her in arms and showered her love on her.. hope khushi cope up and starts living her life in present and moving ahead... well what did she see in newspaper that made her to decide to stroll... one thing is sure it is something about arnav... and who was there at her door... hope she is fine.. loved the update.. well dear i am in love with your story and loving the way you are writing it.. also never care for controversies you write the way you want.. love you work and way you are writing.. do continue soon.. best wishes dear and HAPPY WRITING

thanks for pm 😊

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d updtae. Amazingly good. Cudnt be more better. Awsumm. Omg whu wer d men , hope khushi is not in danger. Awsumm. Update soon

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ShwetapS

@ShwetapS

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Hey Pakhee, I stumbled upon your story through a recommendation link and I am thoroughly enjoying how the story is unfolding. I am fairly new and irregular on the forum and very much a new entrant to the FF world. however, yours is the only story that has caught my fancy so far... It's intriguing, with intense characters with equally intense back stories. I am sure as the story progresses all the pieces will fall in place. would love to be part of this rollercoaster ride with you. So how do get access your blog? Do I need to buddy you? Need your guidance as I feel pretty lost on this platform!

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pooja

@sanluvug

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

came across ur story..read it in one go..fabulous update.
arnav n shyaam has so much hatred for kushi bcoz she is garima s daughter.. akash settled with payal..arnav spoiling his own life,glad that atleast he obey payal words ..loved arhi meet with their kiss..lovely update..kushi is right there is loop holes in shashi s story..who is that he responsible for all this happenings...loved it..
pl pm me when u update

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Vaibhavi Mane

@cookie-lover

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Hey thanks for sending pm... actually first one...

i just loved Madhu bua... and the line saying She was always Khushi's mother... the sentence it is her prayer which will never be answered was heart wrenching... i'm interested more in knowing what will happen when Arnav will come to know about Khushi's reality...

do send me your link...

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Thnx for d pm

Beautiful.

Khushi's questions related to her mom n her Bua explaining her the fact thru a story ws really beautiul n touching. how else cn anyone explain tht to a kid.

Now khushi knws the reality of life her mom n most of all her lonely existence.

She's deeply feeling the loneliness with no other person 2 call her own.

Wonder wht ws in the newspaper abt Arnav.

I bet its him outside her door.

Hi Paakhi

I'm definitely a fan of ur writing so pls do add me to ur blog list..

All the best for ur blog;)

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Asrkkgsr

@Asrkkgsr

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

nice part.poor khushi suffered too much

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foesb

@foesb

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

I really loved the way you have written the flashback part,it was awesome! Lil Khushi for the first time noticing the absence of a mother figure in her life and then Madhumathi bua doing her best within her capacity to make Khushi understand the reality in such away her lil mind won't get hurt. That part was splendidly portrayed.

And so, after leaving the baby at her Bhua's place, the monster took the Mommy with him. And, baby lived at her Bhua's place after that" a small doubt, with regard to the above sentence shouldn't it be the angel who took her mother away,just asking sorry if I'm wrong!

Khushi's life seems to very lonely at the moment, the only support system she had in the form of a mother is also no more and she is having a difficult time in warming up to her own father. Curious to know the reason behind Arnav gracing the news paper 😊 And at the end I'm assuming one of the guys are Arnav, now even more eager to find out what's gonna happen next😃 Need I say it was a fantastic update yet again!

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

well first of all thanks for the note...loved the way u have written it...u show the story and not tell the story ...wooow yaar :)

awesome update...uff her past her loneliness is even killing me honestly...beautifully written...

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Read al 5 pts n 1 go. Beautifully written. Wanna read mre. Do update the nxt pt soon. And abt blog updates, i wish to access ur blog for the updates. If u wish, plz send me the link of ur blog. Stay blessed.