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Aishaqaiser

@Aishaqaiser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Amazing work!!!! totally intriguing storyline!!!!! Excited to read more...,.khushi's life s becoming like cobweb..d more she tries to clear it..d more she gt entangled!! Cant blame her 4 trust issues.. 2 much happened..2 quickly!!!

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

superb depiction of emotions from Khushi and her Bua.

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Did both Arnav and Shyam see her ? It's scary..loved the update

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ziya-farhannish

@ziya-farhannish

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

wow.. just came across! superb story, good writing, do pm me if you do them, thanx. update soon.

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_disha_

@_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

New Reader here ... thanks to shruti's post.

And boy am i glad to have found this gem.

Its got drama , thrill and suspense and you are doing a mind blowing job with every update.

Garima and Shashi's past was tragic to say the least. The turmoil that has left in its awake literally screwing up Arnav and Shyam is freaking insane. Khushi seems to have had a solid upbringing and i love her in this story.

The first meeting between Arnav and Khushi was explosive.

Loving the detail you have been putting in every update ... it must be such a task for you also to keep track of the various sub plots you have going on.

Please add me to your buddy list, it will be appreciated !

Ps: Do you have an index? This is the first time i have come across your work.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

awesome update loved it <3 thanks for the pm

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Loved d update. loved how u portrayed khushi's innocence. what is in d newspaper?

Regarding u note pls inform about ur blog. Would love to read ur works. Thanks for d pm

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

awesome update the flash back was so sad and the story was heart breaking and was the guy she saw arnav and please tell me thew another one is not snake thanks for the pm awesome update