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sruthick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

So it was Arnav..!!
Bt i thought Arnav s not involvd in any kind f physicl relatnshp...
Im confusd...
Garima's killr s Anjali's fathr...!!
Bt y did he killed her..!!
Waitng 4 d nxt part...
Cntinue soon

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ARS24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

read it in a go

its awesome pls add me in ur list

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raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update amazingly good. Beautifully written. loved evry bit of it. Cudnt be more better. Arnav is sooo awsumm. Update soon

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foesb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Another intriguing update! What caught my attention most in this update was Anjali. I could totally imagine her posture and attire the way you have explained it. And I feel like Daljith's appearance very well fits with description you have provided😊 And I love seeing a strong Anjali as opposed to the show, so it was brilliant!

So Khushi walked in to Arnav making out with some random gal. He really is full of himself😊 But seems like already he has felt the weird sparks that are flying between them, even Khushi has but she is trying her best to ignore those and mend her messed up life. She introduced herself, but of course she used a different surname if I'm not mistaken. Can't wait to find out how these two will fall for each other. As at for now its quite obivious that they are poles are part yet they are connected from by the same past as well as the same agony of loosing parents.

And btw it was mentioned that Anjali and Arnav are siblings right? And Anjali is a Jha so which means she is married to Shyam who is looking for Khushi😕 Don't know whether I have misread, so please excuse me if I'm talking crap! Anyway now it's known Anjali's father is the culprit who is responsible of every thing that has ruined everybody's life. As usual a great update! Looking forward for the revelations as well the progression between Arhi😃

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harsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

I know I am pathetically late but I will take my time to read each and every chapter and comment.

Chapter 4 :

You described the eye lock at such a length , I could hear Rabba Vey in the background. Khushi and Arnav are neighbours and the fact itself opens a lot of opportunities for their interaction. Love thy neighbour !

Shashi and Raghu's talk seemed like a Secret Service discussion - full of mystery and the constant mention of someone.

Even though Khushi was born with a silver spoon , the way you described the interiors was awesome , but with the silver spoon came thousand other banes.

I am liking the constant mystery element in the story. It keeps the readers on their toes.

Edited by harsha.. - 11 years ago

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_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Wow ... so much happening here !

The first part with an extension to Arnav and Khushi's interaction fabulously scripted giving a sharp edge to Arnav's character.

Anjali Jha ...my my what a lady beauty with brains and bravado... lethal combination and the way she handled Robin was spine chilling.

So who ever is the person they are waiting for Anjali has a major personal vendetta along with what her profession demands.

The mystery is deepening with every update!

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harsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

I am treating this FF as a treat. In the morning I decided that if I do the 50 questions of Quant and 15 pages of words only then I will get to read the next part. It is kind of a bait for me. I know I am childish, no need to roll your eyes.

Chapter 5 :

You wrote the Khushi - Madhu scene brilliantly. Life is cruel but it just got worse for Khushi with Madhu's murder. Earlier atleast she was blissfully unaware of her past and was happy in her own cocoon.

She saw Arnav's photo in the tabloids and was annoyed. Why ? She seems to have seen his photo before too as he appeared to be familiar to her.

Though I am tempted to read the next part and get to know who is at the door but like a good child I will resist the temptation, get my work done quickly and come back again.

PS : Though the final decision is entirely yours but I will suggest that you don't move your story to the blog. Since we are new to writing and don't have considerable reader base , IF works the best for us. I know silent readers are annoying but keeping that part aside look at the brighter side - you get many devoted readers through this forum, who comment regularly.

If you move it to the blog many people won't get to know of this wonderful story. You can delete the readers who don't comment from your buddy list. It will save you the effort of pming and the disappointment of not getting enough comments. Just a suggestion , take the final call after regarding all the pros and cons.

Edited by harsha.. - 11 years ago

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dingle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

You are spinning quite a complex web. It's thrilling to read

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

bloody hell i think i am in love she shoot and she know how to treat a man anjali your my hero this anjali only loved how she let the guy go close and killed him wicked and the man who wants khushi dead raped her mom and she had her hurt she castrates him loved the update and arnav wow what a jerk awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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harsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Chapter 6 :

Now the last thing I expected was Arnav making out with a girl. Though I was sure that one of them will be Arnav but didn't expect him to be down some girl's throat. Though I liked the girl's name - Cara.

Arnav is a model ! You penned down my fantasy. Perfect job !

The Anjali scene reminded me of Bipasha Basu from Dhoom where she does similar shooting practice. I loved the whole scene. Brilliantly written. I liked reading the whole shooting the mole and the conversation and revelations that followed.

There is a new character in the offing - Rana Singh.

I liked this chapter the most. The story is really unfolding now.