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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Loved the update...

Continue Soon...😊

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afsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Ur sister is sort of right

Im confused but i wont run away or bash you 😉

Nice update

Arnav n Khushi are neighbours whipeee

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sruthick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Awesome update...
Both r attractd 2 each othr...
I thought Arnav wud gt angry aftr that slap.
Bt he ddnt...!!
Who s that man who killed Garima..nd nw trying 2 kill Khushi...??
Waitng 4 d nxt part...
Cntinue soon

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

How dare you ask me if I'll continue to read you or NOT? I think you weren't in senses when you actually asked me that!

I LOVE your writing! Reasons being so simple. You writing is flawless & exquisite. I was very well able to picturize the whole scenario which you have penned down here.

The crime scene, khushi's entry, the delhi scenario, their first meet & the effect afterwards was all so beautifully written!

The past was really painful & all the questions raised by khushi were my doubts too. I see you don't have any loopholes here.

Arnav thinks that it was because of khushi's protection that his parent's lost their lives. Well it can be expected after all he was younger when it happened & definitely a weaker one, as you have mentioned.

Shyaam is already an evil soul to me in this FF! A leech who can do anything for money.

I can't comment more without reading more. So waiting eagerly!

I am confused completely,

But loving the story too...definitely,

So many secrets floating around already,

Waiting for the story to unfold eagerly!

P.S. See, I kept my promise😛

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

See Pakhe m continuously stalking ur thread!!😆

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Vaibhavi Mane

@cookie-lover

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Yea...its confusing... but i love to read conspiracy...

the last part was just amazing... period..

do pm me pretty please

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Note

Today's update is postponed til Friday. I am sorry to keep you waiting (If anyone is that is😆). I am right now not in best of my health, so writing gets difficult. But, 1/4th of the chapter is done, so it won't take me long to pen the rest down.

Sorry for delaying

See you on Friday😊

-Paakhee

Edited by camlin - 11 years ago

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Take care Pakheee!!!!!!

come back soon!!!!

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

awesome concept !!! loved all the four parts which i read in one go.. i was recommended this story by one my friend.. tell you its mind blowing.. loved the way you are writing it.. grip is there and good flow and no confusions.. do continue soon.. also do add me in your pm list.. looking forward to next update... HAPPY WRITING 😊