Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

beautiful

so they went for an unofficial date:-)) sweet of arnav to order jalebis for khushi, ofcourse he will deny tht he did it on purpose:-)

cmon arnav control ur temper, why do u have to remind her tht she is just a secretary and tht too infront of another man:-((

hope Arnav will have the brains to recognise or atleast guess tht the design is khushi's or atleast hope NK or La tells arnav and gives khushi the credit she deserves

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

wow. ur ff is amazing so different so emotional and loved the chemistry among them. i hate lavanya how can she do this. i hope arnav come to know about this really soon

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rupamudra

@arshirupa

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

congrts on new thread

awesome update

loved it

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Really really nice n amazing update.
Ulala Arnav tying up Khushi's choli. 😉 😳

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Loved it...

Arnav keeps pushing the thought that Khushi is a designer..he's stuck with personal secretary... Love how jealous he's getting...

Loved the bangle moment...awesome...you manage to surprise us..always!

Your writing is amazing ..Kavi..the story is flowing so well...

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

very professional piece of writing...

want to see a wild side of Khushi for arnav too in future cause she just loves as well as lusts for him

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome update
Wish you had time to update more than once

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Fabulous chapter, damn the guard 😳😳😳 Beautifully written, superb!!

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@.Boss.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Amazing update! Uh, the almost kiss 😆 I do hope they complete it soon! 😉 I wonder how would arnav react when he'll find out about the dress! Can't wait for the next part already!

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

The push pull continues. It is they Khushi and Arnav we grew to love in the show but with your own twist. I loved how you crafted their trip. I have to say just reading it I was lost there as well in Delhi right with them. Such fun to see Arnav's jealous side with Suraj & NK.

NOW Lavanya that girl needs a good kick in the ass. How dare she be so manipulative? Poor Khushi, it's obvious Lavanya has been able to get by using and manipulating other's talents in her favor. Shame on NK for doing the same thing. Not cool.

I have to go back now to Khushi's behavior at the end. What happened? What drove her reaction to that young boy, I'm with Arnav very much not like the Khushi we have been reading about.

Arnav definitely won some points sending over the bangles in the costume bag. I wonder does he know that Lavanya's not the one behind the design, I just get that sense with some of his comments.

This is very erratic post, but you've left me all over the place!