The Bride With A Doll..Thread#3 Completed Arshi SS

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kutkut12

@kutkut12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

oh jenny where is Arnav?😕 I hope he is fine and he comes back for her.
2 years have passed and he did not come back? why?😭
Waiting for Khushi to grow up ?
Please update sooner this time.

Waiting

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

I love the way Arnab and Khushi are becoming more and more aware of each other with the passage of time. You have written the whole progression so well!

The ending was so heart breaking! Poor Khushi! Her growing up has indeed been very painful! Wonder what happened to Arnab?

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

he dint meet khushi for two years!!!!

arnab promised to take khushi with him aftr his exams!!!

wat happened in these two years!!!

hope arnab is fine...

update soon...

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

OMG...That was beautiful Jen, but so sad. Arnav has disappeared since the past two years? What happened to him? Is he alive? Is he jailed? Can't wait to read more.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Jen, a very beautiful & [poignant chapter as always... But the only thing I remember right now is it was their LAST MEETING!!!!! Why was it their last meeting?? Is Arnav dead?? Where did he go?? How come no one knows?? Is he in jail?? Please elaborate, this was too sad... 😭

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@sherlockthor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

beautiful! whenever i read amazing stories i am speechless... its spellbinding!

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saritha

@IllGetOverIpk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Beautiful !!!
But why dint he take Khushi with him? 😔
Now Khushi will know wat all he felt ...
Waiting for the next update

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

So so so beautiful. .this fic always takes me in some other time period. .I know that it is actually set in the past but still..it gives me immense peace whenever I read this fic...I can't tell u how impatiently I wait for this fic to be updated. ..khushi though a child still is far intelligent and sharp than many elders...she has her own thinking and point of view which is very strong even at this age...I am sure arnav wanted a partner like her always who can talk and think on the frequency as his. ...poor khushi. ...arnav still knows about his feelings for his wife but a child in khushi doesn't let her recognise her true feelings still..I guess that's the worst phase in any body's life when u r considered neither an adult nor a child...I can't believe that arnav didn't come back for 2 years..I just hope that he is safe and comes back to take his princess soon...I hope that he didn't get caught in the revolutionary activities. ...I know it would be a great thing if arnav fights for the country but I am looking at this story as arnav and khushi's story only...I hate it when they are not together. ...can't wait to read more of their scenes..continue soon

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nhrb

@nhrb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Because this was their last meeting...

noo.. u just can't do this to us.., u can't separate our Arnab & khushi.
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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#590

It was so beautiful to see their bond growing. Finally they were coming closer. How easily she used to tell him that she will miss him or how she told him not to attend those meetings. As if she had a right over him.

The feelings were mutual and that made it more special. Him comforting her and calling her Khushu was so sweet.

Then what happened in between. 2 years? She must be shattered. He promised her. It must be serious because he was meant to get her.

Now the ending has made me confused. Whether she will read the whole thing and get more heartbroken over how he waited for her or she will just stop reading here and a misunderstanding will begin where she will think that he wasn't happy with her.

I don't say this generally but This has to be your best story by far. Thank you for writing this. Respect.