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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

jenny i dont know how khushi the child bride lived without arnab with a heart with a knowledge about some truth about his disappearance ... here it is impossible for me to even pass two minutes quietly after reading the update...yeh restless dil maange more 😭

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

That is quite a cliff hanger Jenny. I really can't wait for your next update.

First of all you mentioned it was their last meeting. And it was been two years they didn't seen each other. Where is Arnavb then? I hope he is fine. My intuition says he is in jail. I'm scared in premonition.

felt a visceral pain for the poor girl. Lost her family in an epidemic, became a child bride unbeknownst of the meaning of a marriage. loved Arnab like her life. And now he also left. What she really got? Arnab wrote it right, that her childhood was snatched from her. But I'll say not her childhood but her whole life has been snatched from her.

Now I wish wistfully that Arnab keeps his promises, he comes back to take her with him.

really loved their meeting. Their myriad love was shown in their behavior and in their words. Though Khushi was very young, but her thought was quite mature. I guess her intellect impressed Arnab.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

last meeting whats's that please please jenny no tragedy please arnav aur khushi hamesha

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Keenara

@Keenara

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Lovely update...but wat is thing last meeting...plz clarify

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

What do you mean "Last Meeting"?

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Beautiful chapter Jenny!😊

please do keep writing :-)

Where is Arnab? Why did he not come to get Khushi?

Did you write this was their last meeting???? 😲

You meant last meeting in the next few years...Right?????😕

Not LAST last meeting I hope...I can't handle sad endings dear

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MEsw

@MEsw

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

some one said ignorance is bliss...make him read this chapter...he will kill himself...

not knowing why they haven't met for two years?
not knowing what happened in those two years?
not knowing what she will read and what she will make of those words written in his journal?
not knowing what does last meeting means? like in absolutely final or last in those two years?
not knowing what will happen next?

he made a promise to her at the ghat. will she be able to cling on to that? how long?
did she really understood that promise?
his feelings for her, may not be written in the journal will she be able to decipher it herself?

ignorance can be just the opposite of bliss.
for us and for Khushi...

please please update soon...

as always update was so amazing, the way you have described their emotion. amazing.

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Last meeting 😭 😭

Please please don't do this..

Please update soon

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Jen...

Last meeting...what does that mean Jen...😭

Are they not going to meet again ever...😭...

And Arnab is some one whom I can really worship...such high thoughts...such respect for the females...wish we have more of Arnabs in our society who could look females specially young females beyond lust and treat them as humans...

Jen...I salute you...you are a gem of a writer...love u...

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#570

A two year gap, I am happy about that. Let their be a little more time between until their meeting. Another year, perhaps? I hope Khushi is mature in her thinking now, she was always way beyond her age. What has happened to Arnab?