The Bride With A Doll..Thread#3 Completed Arshi SS

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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Last meeting ??
omg .. did he get cought or what??
Two years she had spent so far with out him ... did she just now stumble upon his journal ??
You have a way with your words ... that can take your reader back in time n feel the emotions and pain ..
Very very wounderfully written part

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Atyay

@Atyay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Loved the update 👏

Looking forward to know what happened at Arnav's side. Very well written. Eagerly looking forward to the next update.

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cheriebinny

@cheriebinny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Oh what happened to arnav? Can't wait 2 know

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Seethu

@Seethu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Chapter 7: Loved it !!!!

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Seethu

@Seethu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Very touching chapter !!!! their journey just started and it is facing obstacles already !!! I hope Arnab is fine ..
Can't wait for the next update already ...

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Omg!.a leap!.that was unexpected.
Poor gal.but where's arnav?.where has he disappered into?.is he in jail?.

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twinki

@twinki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Wow it was a beautiful update
Where has arnav gone?

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710617

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Last meeting.. He's presumed dead isn't he..the whole scenario of independence had this scare in me ... That Arnav will be caught and may not come back... You have added a sense of reality in this situation... Because there were ladies in those eras who were widowed even before being properly married just because they got married so young...

What will happen now... Will she get married again or will she be abused by her in laws..

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

😲

Jen i think you forgot to add a line 😛 'This was their last meeting in the last 2 yrs'...ending it at last meeting scares the daylight out of me. You do not do that to your poor readers heart.

Yeh kaise hua or kyon hua? Did Arnab babu join back the revolutionaries and was jailed or is he... no thats not even an option i am considering.

2 yrs 2 damn yrs Arnab and khushi haven't met each other...khushi must be 17 yrs by now correct me if i am wrong.

So when the time finally comes for Arnab to acknowledge khushi as his wife that man goes MIA...

The entire update was fab but my mind is still stuck at the last paragraph and i can't seem to write about anything else.

I am apprehensive Jen really apprehensive i need to know what has happened to arnab.

Please please write the next update real quick.

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romaisaaa

@romaisaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#610

I seriously can't express my love for this ff in words...it is just beautiful...very different from other ffs...your writing style gives it a very classic kind of touch...I mean its just amazing...your arnab and khushi are both very powerful characters...both are different yet similar in some way or the other...update was just awesome..loved every bit of it...khushi has found arnav's journal...now she"ll come to know about his feelings for her...next update will be very interesting for sure . Desperately waiting for it...:) yes I am confused about this last meeting thing too...it must be their last meeting in two years...I m sure mystery about his absence will be revealed in coming updates...

Edited by romaisaaa - 11 years ago