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luvbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

oh nice... liked it... khushi n akash were never meant to b ...its always arshi for me :D

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yeshyeshna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

helo

it was so beautiful

loved it😊

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Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

The update was an interesting read. Thank you for the note explaining the basis of the story. Definitely helped!😊

Coming to the story, it was nice to see Khushi stand up for herself. There were times during the show, when I just wanted to shake Khushi and tell her to do something for herself. Not something to make someone else happy or to make things better, but something that she wanted. But unfortunately on the show they never really moved beyond the self sacrificing, never thinking about herself version .

Absolutely loved Arnav in the story. This reminded me of their first official date on the show, which the production house made a mess of and left me cringing. But the only good thing that came out of that was Arnav telling Khushi that he loved her for who she was and wouldn't want to change a thing about her.

As for Aakash, it was a little difficult imagining him something other than a love sick puppy.😆

Loved it😊

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Loved Arnav's line to Akash about neither of them being special and that it's only Khushi that is. Akash has no one but himself to blame for losing Khushi. By the way, that was definitely a very interesting avatar for Akash. It was good to see him as someone other than a man who follows others without standing up for himself like a man.

And I always love a strong, independent Khushi who stands up for herself. And an Arnav that will love and support Khushi with all her sanki qualities!

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

It was just great..So akash is Asr...!!! Loved Arnav a lot here...!!!

We don't understand the value of what we have until we lose it..!!

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Sorry Semanti an extremely busy AD ensured that i got here so late.

But OMG what a great thing to come back to. Loved loved super loved this tale.

I loved this khushi who had a spine and who could stand up for herself and her honor and not allow anyone to trample all over her and demean her.

Iss Arnav ka toh kya kehna will stand up for the woman he loves and will ensure that he can take care of problems as much as possible.

I am so glad that they found each other and discovered love.

Tumhara Akash ab mai kya bolon kitna refreshing Akash tha...😆

Loved the gist of the story from where you got inspired.

Waiting anxiously now for Juhi's next tale...

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annieK

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

. Had never quite registered the fact that there were two ASRs ...you gave Akash some substance and recognition . While this Arnav is a vastly improved version and sweet too.

Great story dear.

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IronButterfly

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

It was good to see Khushi living her life.

Wished the show could have given us some of this.

Akash finally had something to do. It was sad to see his character being limited to Jee bhai.

Quite an interesting take you had on his character.

Arnav was endearing. That's how a partner should be.

Khushi's past was past for him. What mattered was her happiness.

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chavvi16

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Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

hmmm well you sure made sure she was nothing like Ariadne
and she did make sure that she didnt weep over that relationship
she sure made the right choice to leave him and marry his cousin
hey this ASR was too vain for her liking
and dont think khushi could have tolerated him anyway for too long
at least arnie let her be
which is why she ended up with him
of course she joined AR for revenge
but had she not done that she wouldnt have found arnie right
sometimes its right to be bit selfish
and fight for your own worth
she did just that
why be in stuffy relationship that she had no say in
but instead be with a man who appreciated her khushiness
okay thats sounds odd but so true
and yes hell hath has fury like woman scorned for sure
in between all this akash lost out on a gem