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Posted: 12 years ago
😃

Great to see you both back with a bang ...
I must say that each tale is so different from each other ...

Loved this Khushi ... she had the spunk to break up with Aakash ...
and in the bargain found a worthier partner for herself ...
and then literarily throwing it in Aakash's face how unworthy he was for her ...

Thanks Semanti ...
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its really beautiful...and different too...Loved it...thanks for the mail...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful tale and an equally wonderful inspiration for the same as well👏 Makes me want to know more about it.
I always have maintained that it is indeed a treat to have an Akash who is not reduced to being just the yes man to Arnav. Cousin rivalry is an angle well explored over here, not to mention the vividly described differences between the two cousins. Made for an exciting read.

For long Khushi has been epitomised as a sufferer and a selfless individual; FFs taking it to a new level and making me wonder at times of the impossibility of creating a character that is difficult to exist in real world. And so characters which are faulty have always found a champion in me; the Khushi in this one being one of them.

Loved reading this; my only wish is for having read about the inspiration at firsat...I'm sure I would have enjoyed reading it even more.




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Posted: 12 years ago
A tale of having it all, a totally different one!! At a point I thought that Aaksh was Arnav :p 🥱 I could't guess what would happen in the end! Wonderfully written " Unique " one !! Loved it! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a diffrent setup..
the analysis between two cousins .where akash is typicl obnoxius rich,on same hand arnav is grounded.
nice tale..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I Liked This Selfish Khushi And Sober Arnav 😊
Edited by tabzz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok so u had me fooled initially.. I was loving the khushi who voiced her opinion and had one strong mind but then making akash the idiotic version of asr was surprising and also enjoyable.. I just lovee it whn authors shw him in strong characters even if tht means he is downright idiot like this one..
and arnav.. hayeee kya bolun... he was adorableee...😳
and the part where he said khushi was perfect...
I had this hugeee grin along with dreamy eyes after tht part throughout the update...
loveeed it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
1st of all i loved seeing this akash... we had enough of his super good cool guy thing...

and then khushi...wow...how i caved to see this khushi... and im glad finaly u bought her out of her shell ...

loved every bit of it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow, what a beginning! When was recollecting her earlier encounter with ASR, I thought she was speaking of Arnav... everything seemed to point to that... then it turned out to be Akash who strung he along and abandoned her... never saw that coming! Way to go, Semanti! But love this feisty Khushi who put Akash in his place. Being a rich heiress, there must have been so many people doubting her work ethics, added to which her resignation from Raizada Pvt. Ltd must have fueled some more gossip... nice to see a spunky Khushi answering Arnav's question cheekily... lucky that it didn't backfire on her. The contrast between Arnav and Akash is vividly etched in that para... nice to see Arnav being himself and inspiring Khushi to be the same... thanks to her relationship with Akash, her confidence seems to have taken a beating what with his constant reprimands about her clothes and behaviour [hate those kind of men]. Akash was all about show while Arnav epitomized substance... lovely sentiment... can relate to it as I get the feeling that the world nowadays prefers flamboyance over substance... that is what I experience with my students, much to my disappointment... humility is a thing of the past. "I don't know...Because it would taint the 'family honour'?"Arnav had looked at her in bewilderment. "What rubbish have you been watching recently?" Loved it! The flashbacks keep the back story of the Arnav-Khushi relationship pretty real. Their relationship is one of equals, where each has the freedom to chart their own course and be himself / herself... relationships where either partner tries to change the other won't last long, as Akash has found out to his detriment! "You never got it, did you Akash? I'm not special. Neither are you. She however, is." Sigh! Arnav values Khushi for who she is, while Akash never did! Sensible of Khushi not to keep from Arnav the facts about her prior relationship with Akash or her reasons for joining AR. This Khushi and Arnav are made for each other! A feel good story.

Semanti, your thoughts with regard to IPKKND and Khushi's character echo mine... the story of Theseus and the Minotaur is something I read a long time back, but didn't know that he abandons Ariadne... with your updates, one learns something new each time.

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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE: U may skip the 1st para...if not, read at ur own risk!😳

Ystrday i stalked till 2.30 am n what do i get now!!!commenting on 80 pg! i know u dont fadak it...so i wont fadak it too. mujhe koi fadak na padhta hai dammit!!...suna tumne!😡 aur v sunlo...my phy CT was ok...apke wajese nahin...apke baujoot bhi...hamari xm thik hai!(plz ignor spelling mistakes...i know my hindi is bad but its a famous kkg dialog, couldnt resist it!)😛 though in tution, teacher asked me...what i m day dreaming of! sob sob...it was too heart breaking to know u hav updated but i was rotting wid studies!😭

now coming to my horror os😆

THAT was beyond shocking! Akash Singh Raizada...ASR!😲 lol...i couldnt stop laughing! i alys admired Akash i ipk...until they made him a hypocrate😔
2 lines for this Akash...
* Empty vessel sounds much.
*All that glitters isnt gold.
Akash is a arrogent jerk! He deserved it...a punch frm my Khushi😉

I love my ASR...Arnav Singh Raizada. he is like...I mean what i say n i do as i say.
He loves khushi the way she is...thats called true love. He is a man of deeds unlike his cousin! I loved how u portrayed arnav(though i preffered a vampire...no chappelwa plzzz!)

The best part was Khushi. she was truely a tigress in everyway😉...she gave it back to ASR just the way i wanted her in the show.
Strong, determined n a bit selfish...i love this KKG!

the show could never do justice to my KKG. this is how my kkg was supposed to b. but they never really did justice wid any charecters!

i know abt the inspirarion u r talking(not that i could guess). ek jamana tha jab hum in tales pe marte the😆 ab hum expelanti tales pe marte hai😃

Finally this tale turned out to b far better than my imaginary horrible horror os!🤣
Semanti ...U r BRILLIANT n never cease to amaze me.👏
U r awsome just like this os...BAS...double BAS!!🤗

ps. i tried my best to write a well deserved comment...😳

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