FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added) - Page 88

Originally posted by: bs_deeps

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Originally posted by: .sakshi.

res!

-unress-

I am back at my second position..wohooo!!

The update was awesome Di! Their talking to each other everyday to create a strong bond between them other than the Desire was so nice! I was really Aww-ing when Khushi was remembering all those moments spent in the office when she came here for the first time..that was adorable! <3

and then finally..when they saw each other..their excitement to meet each other, their longing to be with each other was so perfectly portrayed!

''A part of her ran to him, to seek comfort in those strong arms. A part of him opened his arms, to let her softness mold him. Their souls embraced each other, trying to make up for torment of the last three weeks, feeling more now what they had missed as they were in front of each other again.''

^^This part was just so beautiful! <3

And finally..he realised he love her?! Hope there is no more twist..:P

Waiting for the next part! :D

Originally posted by: arpitasharma

Res

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Ah! A delightful update Di!

Their anticipation and desperation to see other realizing that none of their feelings was just desire but much more than that and the unsettling feeling of happiness and nervousness at the same time made my heart fill with warmth!

The thin thread of communication - the phone, was all they had and the mere wish to have each other in their arms was beautiful. Sigh! How much I had missed all of this! How much I had missed you and your writings!

And Khushi's surprise had definitely worked! And the ending scene of realization for Arnav when he understands all his changes were not just merely because of crazy hormones, but a need to be with her and the feeling of love was just the perfect ending!

Thank you so much for a beautiful chapter! Waiting eagerly for the next one!

Lots of love,

Arpita

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

I am satisfied with your smile. 😳

Originally posted by: bs_deeps

thats not smile 😆

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

WOW...its been three weeks...and their relationship progressed so much...loved it how they keep each other informed...miss each other...their eagerness to meet...desperation for each other...just WOW...and bechari Khushi...wanna surprise him...but luck wasnt in her favor, i guess...but at last they come face to face...and forgot everyone else...as if its just two of them...and finally, FINALLY he realized that he loves her...WOW...U couldnt give us a better eidi apu...thanks a lot for this...love you...

Originally posted by: ramyarn

Eid mubarak.

I thought that you will not update the ff cause you are not feeling well. So this is a surprise update for me.

The longings for each other is portrayed so beautifully. Glad that you have explained the thoughts of both Khushi and Arnav. So Khushi decided to give a chance to their relationship. Don't worry Khushi you should not wait for long period to make him realize the love , cause he already realized it perhaps he may take some time to profess it loudly.

My favorite part in this update, is the meeting of the lovers , they cannot show the happiness they felt because they are in a group, but they can read it through the eyes.

Hats off to you for portraying it so lovely.

Thanks for the PM..

Originally posted by: jas0308

eid mubaarak!!!

beautiful update

so khushi is in delhi now..

loved it how described their desperation to meet each other, their phone conversations, how miserable they were to see each other and after 3 weeks they did

aww.. poor khushi wanted to surprise him, indeed she surprised him but also got surprised herself

omg.. the way you wrote about their expressions and their emotions.. got me emotional.. I know it was not at all emotional but it was really very intense scene.. loved it

wow... arnav realized he loved her.. I mean he always knows so but didn't admit it but he did now!!! eepps

very beautifully written

continue soon