FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added)

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Aww that was sweet!! Great job! Loved their semi reunion!

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

My 1200th post! I was saving it for 2 days for something good.. and here it comes! Something really really yammy!

Beautiful update.. I love the way you narrate their minds.. in simple words and in coherent expressions..

The surprises to khushi's surprise plans were interesting.. and good that finally when they met, both got surprised .. an unplanned encounter!

Wonderful.. I just loved reading it. it left me grinning for a long time..

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Nakshatra

@amfashionista

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Omg its fantabulous

tanz 4 pm

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rupamudra

@arshirupa

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

awesome update

really nice that khushi understand arnav pov

loved the update

continue soon

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keyboard123

@keyboard123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Loved it!! Amazing update!! Hope we get another one soon!!

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Fantastic chapter

Loved it

Its been 3 long weeks they have not seen each other so the anticipation to be together was very much their

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Nisha

@NishaAP

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Awesome. It's been three weeks and their relation progressed well. They both missed each other. Their earnestness to see each other and their desperation to be in each other arms.. just awesome. Kushi's surprise was not success. Poor Arshi. But finally Arnav realized that he loves her. eagerly waiting for his next step.

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Ress😳

Unres😃

An update on Eid...That too an awesome one asusal😃Hope u had a Fantastic Eid with ur family,Farha di🤗

Nw coming to the update,as i was always say,the way u write their inner feelings and their desperation to meet each other is Awesome...Loved reading it.Thy have come a really long way frm the beginning and Khushi remembering all those past moments wer beautiful😃

Ah...Poor girl,wanted to surprise Mr.Raizada but she couldn't do it, but anyways unexpectedly she surprised Him😉

As thy always say,Distance brings the realtionship closer😃So these three weeks of judaai had a great impact in their relationship 😃

"Damn." Arnav's brain answered as if in sudden realization. "I love her."- Finally the realisation has hit him...Am more happy,I think more than Khushi i was waiting for this realisation 😆So,Hope ther is no more twist in the story and waiting to kno wen he voices his love to herThat wil be a Veryy spl moment😃

Thank u for the pm di😃

Edited by vqwerty - 11 years ago