FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added)

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Eid mubarak.

I thought that you will not update the ff cause you are not feeling well. So this is a surprise update for me.

The longings for each other is portrayed so beautifully. Glad that you have explained the thoughts of both Khushi and Arnav. So Khushi decided to give a chance to their relationship. Don't worry Khushi you should not wait for long period to make him realize the love , cause he already realized it perhaps he may take some time to profess it loudly.

My favorite part in this update, is the meeting of the lovers , they cannot show the happiness they felt because they are in a group, but they can read it through the eyes.

Hats off to you for portraying it so lovely.

Thanks for the PM..

Edited by ramyarn - 11 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#712

eid mubaarak!!!

beautiful update

so khushi is in delhi now..

loved it how described their desperation to meet each other, their phone conversations, how miserable they were to see each other and after 3 weeks they did

aww.. poor khushi wanted to surprise him, indeed she surprised him but also got surprised herself

omg.. the way you wrote about their expressions and their emotions.. got me emotional.. I know it was not at all emotional but it was really very intense scene.. loved it

wow... arnav realized he loved her.. I mean he always knows so but didn't admit it but he did now!!! eepps

very beautifully written

continue soon

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago