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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

When will you cease to leave me amazed? The chapter was brilliant!

The first chapter had my laptop burning in flames, I feared it might turn into ashes! I looked backwards, sideways, as the color rose up my cheeks. It was indeed D for Desire! 😳

The confessions were so spontaneous, it felt as if they've been saying it for years!

The second half consisted of Arnav narrating about his demons of the past. Again the way you've written makes it different from all others. Obviously one who has faced so much in life may not have as much a strong pillar of faith in the institution.

A leap of few weeks? Waiting to see how the story unfolds. Thank you for the lovely chapter!

Lots of love! ❤️

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

This update actually left me teary-eyed. No one should have this much grief in their lives. So now I can understand why Arnav is not a believer in marriage.But will his love for Khushi make him go beyond the fear and embrace marriage. Khushi sure has lot to fight for now - her own love for Arnav, Arnav's insecurities and past demons and along with that she has to fill his life with joy and happiness. I am sure Khushi can be that healing touch to Arnav and hopefully it won't be too long before Arnav reciprocates the gesture. We can have bad experiences in life but we shouldn't allow them to cloud our future. Arnav sure has to grow up and face his fears and accept the future with Khushi.Can't wait for the next update. The story definitely feels like a long romantic novel - one that I would sit with on a lazy afternoon. Take me on the ride - I am all ready.

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Gayuraj

@Gayuraj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

i so loved it..!!
beautifully written..!!
w8ng for next..

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

nice update
arnav past is horrible
liked it

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

update was superb just outstanding..

lovd the long update...

loved their making out session..

truely passionate nd sensual...

update was full of love passion nd emotional..

he told her his most dreadful experiences nd why he

hates marriage...

I was completely in the update nd literally

crying while reading his most dark events.

khushi hold him out...loved it how she told him

he will wait for dat day wen he will believe in her love nd

marriage...she made him poured his heart out to her..

he loved het but yet captured in his past events...

fabulously written 👏

loved it

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

superb part...

d starting was aahh HOT!!...😳

loved it..

n thn arnav's past!!...omg!!...😭

we cant blame him for not beliving in mrg nw!!...

so much broken relationships!!...😭

beautifully written ...

loved it...

update nxt part soon...

Edited by nirmal1992 - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Loved it. Brilliant chapter. There is no other word for it.

In spite of the angst, this chapter brought a smile to my lips.

I feel they were never as close to each other as they are here.

Arnav had a very difficult childhood and even worse adolescence, but now Khushi has entered his life.

She will give him all the love he lost out on, and his life will be better now.

Waiting for the next chapter.

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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Haha! Update will come much before 80th page dear! Your wish will not be fulfilled. 😉

Even if your update didn't come on the 80th page, my comment surely came on the 82nd page. and this is the 83rd page! 😉

Your thread spammers are the greatest I have known. I must appreciate them for their sheer BRILLIANT poetry! 😆👏

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Beautiful updates...
i am really sorry for arnav... that was one horried past anybody could go through...
hope he gets his share of happiness he totally deserve it.
thanks :D

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#570

That was an amazing update with two contrasting moods..the passion was explosive ... Both have in them...the transition from burning passion to the more serious mood state was very good...

They have love for each other desire for each other...understand each other...I'm sure there's trust too... But inspite of all these ...they can't be together as they respect each other immensly too... But they have to find h middle road...probably time will make them find middle ground...

Waiting for next update...

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