FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added)

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Ohh it was a roller coaster ride of emotions.

From passion , realization, excitement to remorse and pain. You kept us hitched to the story while untangling every side of Arnav.

No doubt after experiencing such blows of life , Arnav started doubting marriage system. His reasons are opt and Khushi too felt the same.

Now want to see how Khushi make him trust in Love and marriages again 😊

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

That was simply AMAZING!!!

All these were my reactions throughout the chapter. I just can't tell you how amazed i am with the way you write. How can someone write so well that i can actually imagine things without trying..

The chapter especially the emotional part was really amazing!!
You get me captivated with your story...

Thank you so much for this FF 😳

I really loved their conversation...

Edited by PrInCeSs_dIVa - 12 years ago

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

You absolutely surprised me!

After all that arnav narrated about his past, his family and their miseries in marriages, i thought khushi would think of giving a chance to arnav. She would understand arnav's need and would agree to find a middle ground to be with arnav.

But what finally happened... really i salute you for such brilliant story telling! I hope Arnav would one day break all barriers of fear and insecurities and love khushi beyond any other thought.

Brilliant!

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

The update was great...My heart cried out for Arnav...I hope khushi stays with him..!!!👏👏👏

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bhutop

@bhutop

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

wonderful...arnav past is really bad

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

loved d update
continue soon ...

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ppriyaa02

@ppriyaa02

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Too good for chapter..

Loved it..

I understand the insecurities Arnav has towards marriage.. Vow... very well written...

Partial or full confession 'May be I do' loved it... and her smile to acknowledge the same

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nihasan

@nihasan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Dat was an awsum update
lvd each n evry bit of it
feel so srry 4 him
a single man who hav to manage evrytng
lts c hw khushi love unfolds him
n ty 4 da pm

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Zarahatke

@Zarahatke

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Poor arnav a ver painful past very herat wrencing update n very well written

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#560

Okie!!! not that i have never read this story before abt Arnav and his dreaded past that made him what he is .. and blah blah blah! YET ... it seemed so anew ... i guess its a credit to the writer i shall give here for making it appear that way! :)

good one Farah!

Ooh! how can i miss.. their making out session was ... oummm ...hawwtt! *steamy eyes*

Okie i liked the the way Khushi puts it abt when and how he shall love her ... that was something new ... and i really appreciate ...

Okaaay!! a leap of few weeks ... that sounds good! cant wait to know ...

Thanks for the update farah!! :)