Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. *Complete* - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
At last i covered the story
wahh.. Patting my back
Itna lamba suspence..?? Too good
the mansion is too mysterious
har step me mystery
blue ghost... Black saree ghost..
Baapre
i love yr frequent dose of fun
chikky sree jodi... Mashallah
sree mere bhai... U got a very precious gf.dont lose her.lol
i have a gut feeling abt nc. Lets c if its right
n maya... She is hiding a lot too
Shonali is still in shock.her lines make her look so silly for someone who has lost her fiamce
the team is too good
ahaan rathod mia confessed to aisha
poor lady ko firse jhatka
i l try to keep on regularly now
sorry i m late
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Posted: 11 years ago
NC is a teri kheer... but he is cunning... he doubts the ETF... pigeons trackers?? do they really exist???how do they work??? well good move to track ETF as well... chikky fighting for shree... how sweet...😳😳

nice update... clues ko jaldi se sort out koro...mystery is developing more and more so is my curiosity 🤢🤢

continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
The Mystery Continues...😆😆😆 😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 17 :

ETF, 2.00pm

Saakshi was sitting in the lounge with her third cup of coffee. An exhausted Aisha slumped into the chair.

Saakshi : Coffee ?

Aisha : Plz yaar...I need one. Itne sare log!!!

Liza came ith two coffee mugs and passed her one.

Aisha : Thanks, Liza.

Saakshi : Khatam hua?

Aisha : Kuch aur bacha hain, Rathod sir said, he & Chotu'll handle and send me out.

Saakshi : Ok, I'll go.

Aisha : Arre ruko...avi 30 min pehle hi toh aaye ho bahar. Shree ka call aaya?

Saakshi : They're coming. Called us to join them in narby restaurant for lunch, I denied. They'll bring lunch for us.

Liza : They're here (pointed to Saakshi's back through eyes).

Shree : Hey guys, lunch's here.

Sonali : Hello everyone.(all nodded at that)...where's the rest?

Aisha : Yahi hain. tum dono?

Shree : Coming from Swami's.

Saaskhi asked Sonali something through eyes, and she answered it in same manner.Shree was about to ask abou it,but at the same time, a tea boy came and handed Saakshi a flask.

Boy : Didi, aapki flask.

Saakshi : Thank you (she gave him a chocolat and the boy took it smiling; She eyed to the cup)...kitna?

Boy : 28 (and run to Arjun's cabin).

Sonali : What 28?

All asked the same question to Saakshi through their yes.

Saakshi : Sameer & Chotu is coming...(stood up from her chair)..Sameer, would you join us for lunch?

Sameer : Yah, coming in 5 min...You can start.

Saakshi : Ok. Aisha, You'll serve Sameer; Liza, come help me.

Girls started arranging table for lunch; Shree & Chotu helped them. Saakshi serves a plate, Chotu spread his hand to take it, but she took it away. Chotu looked at her, puzzled.

Saakshi : Mere pyaare haathi...itni si khane se tumhara kuch nahi hoga. Help yourself . (put an empty plate in his hand).

Chotu : Toh yeh kiski liye? Tu toh itna nahi khaati.

Saakshi : Yeh uss sher ke liye hain jisne aaj aapni gufaa se bahar naa aane ki qasam khayea hain. Tum log shuru karo, main sher ko yeh deke aati hoon.

...

4.00pm, conference room.

All gathered for case discussion.

Rathod : so, guys did you found anything new?

Aisha : Yes & No.

Rathod : Explain.

Aisha : From last 3 days interrogation, we have 3 solid clues. First, Yatin was a crazy genious & had weired believes. Second, he was involved in some secret things and his engagement with Maya was took place. Third, Maya was his secret keeper, he did everything after consulting Maya. Some even called Maya a witch.

Arjun : And those special 10?

Saakshi : Ruhi Sinha, Maya& Yatin ki favourite makeup artist thi, Yatin ki maximum makeover isine kiya hain, still working for film & TV shows; she said the Saturday meeting was arranged for fun and dress riharsal for horror parties. But Maya believed in black magic & she took it seriously, where as for others it's mere entertainment.Maybe Yatin also.

Aisha : that's why he arranged it !!

Saakshi : Right, he supported Maya...in every step.

Rathod : And the other members?

Saakshi : she took similar names as Dinesh kaka, but another man she mentiond... Kaali. Always cam in black robe and cover his face all the time. He didn't talk ... nobody heard his voice.

Arjun : And what about another one?

Saakshi : she said there was nobody else.

Rathod : how it's possible? It is a coven & this type of things always need 13 people !! If she didn't saw anyone else, toh yeh aadmi karta kya tha?

Saakshi shrugged.

Arjun : Aur baaki sab?

Chotu : Sir, magitian R. Cornworth is dead, he had a daughter who lives in UK.Although she didn't know much about her father's life, she mailed a copy of his will and some friends name who can tell us about her father.And Dino Pareera is living in an Old home, he's suffering from arthraritis and can't come to ETF. I'll meet him tomorrow.

Aisha : And that auction house owner, Naren Mohali, is out of town. He'll be back by next week. Mr. Bose is in Delhi, for parliament sessions.

Saakshi : You mean that MP Bose?

Aisha : Right.

Arjun : Baaki 3?

Aisha : Kundan Shetty & Jagdish Mahatre,both came together, they're befrind to Swami's; specially Maya. Mahatre also takes care of all leagal matters of them and Dr. Shetty is the regular vet for NC's birds. But according to him, he doesn't so amical to Maya, although she introduced him to NC and due to her recommendation NC appointed him as permanent vet for his farm.

Rathod : And he consented about his involvemnt in that secret Saturday night party & he also said it's a mere entertainment for him but a ritual to Maya.

Arjun : Then why he didn't missed it ever... he might had some interest in it.

Rathod : May be, but he didn't admitted it?

Aisha : Mahatre also told us the same story. They all are pointing towards Maya.

Saakshi : Where Yatin is who used to arrange it, & he was the most interested one. Another thing, after Yatin's death all of them stopped doing that; if Maya was the one who was involved in all this, she should've resumed it, right? But nothing like this happened.

Rathod : May be after his death that mansion started terrorize them.

Aisha : No, they just stopped going there. After Yatin's last rituals, they all waited for an invitation from Maya, but she never called them. She moved to her mother's place and after one and half year came back to Mumbai with her husband and first son. But she acted as if there was no party ever.

Saakshi : Haan, Mahatre told he asked her several times for it, but she simply refused to talk about it. When he asked "why", she said the main reason of doing all those is gone, so it's meaningless now.

Rathod : What does that mean?

Sonali : Means after Yatin passd away, she lost the zeal of doing that. Like, I don't like Italian cuisine nowadays, while it used to be my favourite.

Arjun : Did they said anyting about those two people?

Aisha : Not two but one, kaali. And another thing, Sharma sometimes came to complet the circle, but he was not much regular. And all of them were allowed to bring one or two of their friends or non-believers.They used to play pranks with them.

Saakshi : And another thing, they knew about the secret passages, Yatin used them for his terror sessions and illution games. He also challenged them to find the doors, but they always failed. In fact, most of them thought he was bluffing.

Rathod : Means only Yatin knows about those doors...

Aisha : And Cornworth also. He was the director of his horror acts.

Arjun : Hmm...(putting his pen on the file) what about that Mohan Sharma?

Chotu : No idea sir.

Rathod : What that means?.. You should have...

He as interrupted by a junior officer entered the conference room.

Jr. Officer : Sir, Some Mohan Sharma has come.

Rathod : Take him to interrogation room, we're coming.

...

Sorry for being late. I was a little messed up. ill try to regular soon.

& Plz let me know it was.

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey i did'nt get the pm
update was nice so they r moving forward
but still much is left to discover and what is with sakshi and sonali
talking through there eyes some secret or what
that was good one
lagta hain aaj bhuka sher apni guffa se bhar nahi aaiga😆
pls pm me for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb uodate dear...thanc for pm:-)
mystery nd my curosity both r increasng vd every update 😊
well I think yatin is alive nd dong all dis or may b dat director of his pranks as only dey.knw abt secret passages.. 😔
lets see wts d truth nd whos behind all dis...:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
at last u updated...I had been missing this FF 😳

nice update...sort of a filler but then it was needed for the case to proceed...
what about this sonali and sakshi,they are hiding something for sure...

kali and mohan sharma new interesting characters...

continue soon...waiting for the next updates...
Edited by invisible2018 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one dear...

So now Maya is coming to the picture...
Perplexity is getting increased...

Eagerly waiting...
Cont. soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Do at last they r moving
Hope to know wat the secrect behind this
Thanx for pm update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear i am a new reader of your ff: haunted manision... just now read every parts in a go...
ITS JUST AWESOME... SUPERB... words cannot be explained...
seriously when i read the parts i was into my imagination...

no doubt u r a good writer in writing these story keep going...

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPGRADE...


IF BY CHANCE TIME PERMITS PLS DO PM ME...


akvmji...
Edited by akvmji - 11 years ago

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