Swaron OS :'we' wil be back(part 3 pg 10) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
dat was emotional...romantic and cute.. 😉
loved d way u have described everything...specially Sharon prov...
amazing... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
This was a lovely os! It feels good to hear and imagine that swaron are back! I just hope they patch up in the show soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
ho
itni jaldi finish 😲
this is mean !!

anyway this part was relly really emotional
i loved it
aur cute bhi tha 😳
swaron finally together 😳
thanks for the PM
do come up with new stories..
would love to read them 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Wow amazing
Now we.knw u r. Good writer
So.u.better carry on writing
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

Its awsum amazing

I luved it alooot
Nancy yaar u can write more and more
U r really gud in writing do think about it
Just luved it alooot
Finally swaron r back
I hope they cum back in d3 also


Sadaf thank u so so so much 😳
I dnt promise but I wil surely try 😊
N yes Swaron have to come back ...n they will 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: 8085548022

awesome update

loved it


Ty😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: rohan_smile

it was really a nice one...
to be the first one of one's writing..
it was very well done...
even i wrote my first a few days before...BUT i couldn't bring it well like you did...
everything was nice and the os was a well paced one too...
i mean that neither it was very sloww going...
nor very fast forward...
just the way it should be...
the silent conversation was written beautifully...
and really the whole os the dialogues you wrote were hatss off!!!!
you must continue writing such well pieces of writing...
and you can try your hands on films...we really need dialogue writer in the industry :P :)

Rohan :)



Rohan thank u very much 😳
Oh even u wrote ur 1st OS pls do send me the link ...I would love to read it
I m very sure it is not that a gud writing also ...but that vry sweet of u 😊
Actually I personally felt that I made it too repitative ...par I m glad u liked it 😆
I love writing swaron dialogues 😳
I don't promise that I will write more but would surely try 😃
OMG ...films I thing u complimented me too much
No I really appreciate each word of urs...n ty
I m a student n the thing I hate the most is writing essays n letters so 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

dat was emotional...romantic and cute.. 😉

loved d way u have described everything...specially Sharon prov...
amazing... 😃


I m glad u liked it ...ty for reading it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: kamlesh32

This was a lovely os! It feels good to hear and imagine that swaron are back! I just hope they patch up in the show soon!


Patch up I really needed 😊
Ty for reading it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: -spongy-

ho

itni jaldi finish 😲
this is mean !!

anyway this part was relly really emotional
i loved it
aur cute bhi tha 😳
swaron finally together 😳
thanks for the PM
do come up with new stories..
would love to read them 😳


It u find the end forced ??
Pls tell me I would want to knw to improve my work😊

Thanks a lot isha ...ur comment means a lot to me 😃

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