Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 11)

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hi50

@hi50

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#921

That's an awesome update friend...🤗..

More I read your updates, I get more hooked to the FF and become more eager to read the next update.. When are you updating next 😉😆??

Loved every bit of your writing... I don't know how many times I read it...

Loved to see that Arnav is trying to gauge Khushi's feelings for anyone else... liked that tinge of jealousy..

So, Arnav is trying to ignore the fact that its indeed his love for Khushi and hence he wants to marry her.. I wonder if in future Sumar says that he'll go for the operation without any condition & Arnav doesn't need to marry for that reason; how can the smart Raizada manage to keep it cool without accepting the fact that he needs Khushi in his life & that's the reason he wants this marriage..😆😆

Didn't understand the fact though that why Arnav didn't keep his promise to Sumar that he is not going to talk with Khushi regarding the marriage 😲 & let Sumar handle it.. Does he think that Sumar won't be able to get Khushi's consent without his intervention?

Loved this Arnav SO MUCH!! Specially when he told Khushi that he wants her to marry him, there is no arrogance/ego in his gesture.. He just wants her to chose him.. Poor guy, trying to hold his lifeline so desperately..

Will be waiting for your next update eagerly..

Edited by hi50 - 12 years ago

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Leena

@Leenasmg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#922

Nooo!!
I can't believe you ended the update there!! Such suspense! lol! I cannot wait for your next update!!

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afshanbabar

@afshanbabar

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#923

waiting for the next update, just cannot wait anymore.
hurry up, pls.
love
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Nikita

@nikita_88

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#924

Awesome update!

What a cliffhanger what will Khushi!s reaction be!

Loved where it is going...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#925

OMG how could you end with that cliffhanger, how? I just can't seem too see the logic behind it apart from my blood pressure dropping, lol.

However coming to the update it was simply mind blowing and outstanding.

One off they most awaited update of the story, written exceptionally well.

The conversation between Arnav and sumer was very interesting, just as I had expected.

I was quite surprised with Arnav telling Sumer straight out that he wants to marry Khushi, but I'm so glad he did.

However Sumer's concern and worry about Arnav marrying Khushi does seem quite justified as he is thinking it might be a ploy.

But I'm happy he has agreed but wants to talk to Khushi first.

Awww loved the part where Arnav woke Khushi up, her sleep deprived state was so funny.

Khushi is so crazy she got worried about the urgent talk and even questioned Arnav whether he was dying.

The lunch date was brilliant, I can't believe Arnav actually asked Khushi whether she was dating anyone and also what Rishab meant to her.

Finally Arnav broke the news about getting married, so happy that Khushi was disheartened.

But the bombshell came at the end, can't wait to read khushi's reaction and hopefully answer.

The update was a brilliant read, amazing writing.

All I'm saying you will have update as soon as the next thread opens, I'm sure it's not too far.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Thanks for the PM xx

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Chamkili77

@Chamkili77

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#926

loved it. frank no nonsense , no beating around the bush from Arnav. i would so like khushi now to feel attraction for arnav and vice versa and some rabba vey!

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Atyay

@Atyay

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#927

Loved the Update! 👏

The no nonsense conversation between Arnav and Sumer was wonderful; truely enjoyed it as Arnav held a mirror in front of his dad though they were talking about his (Arnav's) marriage.
The scenario between Arnav and Khushi at morning was cute. As for the conversation at the restaurant where you ended; it's obvious that Khushi is not so welcome to the idea that Arnav will get married and perhaps to someone else; might as well say that she is jealous. However, you have also hinted that her promise to Arnav to keep her silence will back fire at her. So, will wait & see how the story moves on.

I think this time, it's Arnav who will surely be happy & relieved now that he has layed all his cards on the table and Sumer and Khushi who will be worried and tensed; although Khushi is tensed most of the time. Still feel a little bad for Khushi; as far as I can see she really has no option other than to give in to Arnav's demands.

Thank you for the update mail. 😊

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#928

Arnav's plan was sneaky, but a master plan never the less... he is implementing classic divide and conquer!

it is a fool proof plan so I can totally see Khushi agreeing to marry him . Now I am afraid Khushi will go through heartbreak thinking Arnav doesn't love her and he will be staying away from her thinking she is not ready...