Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 11) - Page 91

Wow,wonderful. Update .
Finally. Arnav voiced it,about his feelings. He wants to marry Khushi.
And sleeping part is awesome...
And he proposed Khushi for marriage also.
Waiting. For. More ...
Thanks for PM.

Fabulous updates & thanks a ton for the mails 😊

Chapter 21

It was appreciative of Rishabh to take so much of efforts to wash away Summer's phobia & assure him that things would go right especially with Karan by his side. Summer making a quick mental note of the sudden behavioural changes from Rishabh to his sweet Laddoo to his son & he sighing in relief at the thought of atleast his jiji behaving the same as before showed how Sumer was adjusting him to the changes around him together with the constant pressure to undergo the surgery at the earliest

In the convo between Rishabh & Khushi it was so nice that Khushi was able to understand Arnav & the reason for he abstaining from talking to Sumer & also supporting him. I really felt like punching Rishabh 😡 🤢 when he insisted Khushi that she should be addressing Arnav as Bhiaya or something related ... if alone Arnav would have heard it he would murdered Rishabh for suggesting this 🤢

I love Buaji's character a lot in this fable since she seems very sensible & is a mature thinker. The manner in which she handles the problems in RM is awesome. I think years back she must have been living with her hubby but was just wondering whether she did advise Sumer regarding taking the responsibility of young Arnav ??? Buaji's thought of not pressurizing Arnav for marriage was justifiable but at the same time Sumer wanting to see Arnav settled down before he undergo's the surgery is also agreeable. Sumer not wanting his son to suffer from loneliness that he was in right before coming to India a few months back sounds right though Sumer's past mistakes of overlooking his responsibility of his son was grave

'Tell me one thing jiji. You have me, Arnav, Laddoo, Karan, your in-laws, everyone with you, but wouldn't you rather be with jijaji if possible than with us?'.

These lines of Sumer was fab 👏 So true no matter how many people or relations may be with us but nobody can take the place of a soul mate for an adult & that of a mother for a child. Buddy loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Sumer narrating to his jiji about how Arnav never did or never will open up his feelings with anyone for that matter & that's the sole reason why he really wants Arnav to find a partner so that she would care for him & soothen his bruised heart was so thoughtful of Sumer. The convo between the bro-sister duo was wonderful with Sumer stating his reasons for the sudden marriage idea which was more so of a blackmail & Buaji's concern for not to push Arnav at the moment due to the over pressure & stress he's undergoing lately but at the same time she realizing her brother's worry of why he wants Arnav to find a partner at the earliest & then she voicing out her fear of what if the girl is not appropriate for Arnav & the family & she lands up messing his life which was already ruined by Sumer & Sujata; & Sumer's reply of all girls aren't the same was excellently laid down 👍🏼

Khushi's deep & detailed analysis of Arnav & his nature; & she thinking of not bothering him with the friendship issue with Rishabh & do her best to be supportive rather than nudging him with trivial stuff was so thoughtful of her. Buddy, u ending the update with "What she missed was that it is the still waters that run deep. And Arnav is the other name for ocean" was mind blowing 👍🏼 As a reader I'm so excited & all agog to explore Arnav's character who still remains a puzzle regarding many of his moves

Chapter 22

The update commencing with Arnav being calm & composed & trying his level best to not lose his last string of control while listening to his dad's demands in exchange for the surgery & then he venting out his anger was amazingly written. Though Arnav was riled up with his father for coming up with the ridiculous idea of marriage even after his(Summer's) broken marriage & the manner in which Summer & Sujatha overlooked Arnav when he needed them, their love & care the most, due to their differences but Arnav acting otherwise by staying calm & not lashing out on his dad showed the quantum of change in him after coming to Delhi

Arnav mentally praising Buaji for wisely handling the family especially the crazy duo & for also informing him before hand of his father's demand keeping in mind the gravity of the situation so that Arnav doesn't burst out all of a sudden & thereby smoothening the situation was fantastically laid down 👍🏼

The scene where Khushi cutely& stubbornly troubles Arnav repeatedly to have dinner, Arnav on the other hand trying his level best to not vent out his anger while Khushi childishly wondering why the two men were angry on her & to top it Buaji claiming her to be lazy inspite of her repeated attempts to convince Arnav not to neglect food was enjoyable to read 😃

'I said I don't want to eat' he repeated.

'I know' she smiled sarcastically. 'But I want to' 😃

The whole convo followed by Arnav & Khushi's stubbornness & her sarcasm, a smile drawing on Arnav's lips unknowingly easing his anger & he admiring her intently; Khushi's sudden action of holding his hand & dragging him creating a lovely feeling in him 😊 to end very soon & his mind battling with the incident & Rishabh's thought making him bubble in rage while Buaji unknowingly pushes the wrong buttons making Arnav even more riled up & he venting out his piled up anger & frustration on the lamp shade threw light on how Khushi & Buaji tried to soothen the situation for Arnav but always landed up worsening his mood by bringing Rishabh into picture 😔

Enough was enough. There is a limit to niceness and his in-particular came with an expiry date and time. Today. Right now.

Wow!!! was the word that hit my mind when I read this line... just love the way you frame such awesome moresome lines 👏 👍🏼 ❤️

Arnav's soliloquy was fabulously structured bringing out the anger bubbling within him due to his dad's over expecting demand, especially amidst this new problem the most significant thing troubling him the most being Khushi's closeness & friendship with Rishabh ... hmmm ... seems like Arnav's thoughts only revolves around Khushi

The portion where Arnav feels disheartened & broken for being neglected by his parents & that disappointment leading him to get addicted to drugs but now his father all of a sudden using his sickness as a bait to trap Arnav to get his wish fulfilled irking him to an extent that he vowing to not let things get his dad's way while suddenly he calming at the thought of his dad for not asking Khushi to get married but he panicking at the thought of Rishabh being Summer's 1^st choice for Khushi & swearing to never let that happen at any cost & his over possessiveness clouding his mind & heart & he wanting to go to any lengths to keep Khushi with him was astoundingly penned down 👍🏼

On one hand reading Arnav's thoughts my heart cried for him coz he was exactly like a little child 😭 who was left being denied of anything that he wanted with him so that he could feel some warmth but on the other hand his possessive feeling over making Khushi his 😲 whether by ease & willingness or by his tough style made me worry for the significance of Khushi's feelings ... eager to know what would be Arnav's condition ... though Arnav would have been very careful in carving out his plan with great maneuver ... nail biting tension is surpassing my mind to know what would be the family's reaction especially the girl at center-stage

Oh dis was a tym to tym breathe holding chapter
d dissusion of arnav n sumer was one of a superb one it was like arnav z negotiating a deal( vry imp deal of his life i guess) with his opponent not his father for every stony qs. There was a bricky answer hats off Asr z on a missiono suppose he has made sumer stand ata tight spot
d lunch convo was nerving at sum point n at sum relief 1But d biggest answer n reaction z still awaited would khushi agree

woah...this is just fabulous...Arnav's convo with his dad...the way he told him why he wanted to marry Khushi,without revealing his feeling...awesome...another proof of the shrewd mind he has got...then in Khushi's room...she is so cute...still like a baby...this girl really needs someone like Arnav to take care off her...his thought while trying to talk with half asleep Khushi...yeah,loosing Khushi can never be his option...And with the authority he told her about lunch together...wow...and finally at lunch...loved it how he first b assured that Khushi is not in any relationship...then told her that he want to marry her...today this guy has just won my heart...but now what...how's she gonna react...cant wait enough for next part...continue soon...thanks for the notification...

PLEASE Come back, you left us hanging!!

AAArrrggghhh...you DID NOT JUST STOP there ...did you? What are you doing to me woman?

Oh wow Arnav told khushi abt his wishes... Even when Sumer asked him not to??... Wow Arnav is on a mission...

Wow what a cliffhanger! I can't wait to find out Khushi's reaction to the last line...please update soon!!!!

Arnav really think about all the answers he would give his dad...he should have been a lawyer with his rebuttal skills! But some of his words towards his dad were very hurtful, no matter how truthful.

I do have to wonder why Arnav went ahead with telling Khushi himself instead of allowing his dad to do so, like he had told him he would want...I did think that it should have been Arnav who talks to her first, but why would he lead his father to believe he won't?

I really like how Sumer is so protective over his laddoo...even scared that his own blood will hurt her in the process. Really shows the love he has for her!

I must say, Khushi's sentiments at the end were really heartbreaking to read about.

Now I'm just looking forward to the next update😊 Sorry for my impatience, but I want to know what happens next!