ARSHI FF: CARPE DIEM INDEX pg-1 COMPLETED

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

The character sketch threw me off guard. I hadn't expected Khushi to be married to Shyam.
The prologue gave an insight into Arnav-La relationship, where Arnav doesn't want marriage.

After reading chapter 1, all I can say that Shyam is a creep. His mother too.
And Rani Sahiba is Anjali?
Feeling bad for Khushi, having left her studies midway for the sake of getting married.
It's really brave of you to incorporate the harsh realities of life in this story. And commendable too :)

Well written, loving the flow :)

Thanks for the PM. Really appreciate it :)

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: dieforasr

They will meet soon.I love the fact you also hate our snake😆..After next 2 updates you will fell in love with my Arnav.😉

Haayyeee.. waiting eagerly thn..;)

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

very interesting ...please carry on

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Shyam is disgusting how can he try b close 2 Khushi knowing that if they do it it can lead 2 another miscarr?He does't hav a heart.poor K.How is Shyam connected 2 Anjali?Just bcz K cant satosfy him he wants Anjali?

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Kiran

@ILuv-LoveStory

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

well intersting concept..Khushi married to that snake and left her carrier for him and he is cheating

her😡 and Arnav and La having physical relationship but Arnav doesn't want to marry😲..but I'm glad he is committed to La and not like snakewa..but it's obvious that there is comparison between our Arnav and that cheap.. poor Khushi is suffering soo much..eagerly wating for the story to unfold..when our beloved ArHi will meet..

I reallt appreciate u writting such harsh reality of the life in this ff..kudos to u..👏 and thnx for the PM!!

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

This fic just made it to my Fav FFs. :P <3 <3

It's very realistic and your scenes are very imagery. :) x

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

wow great start please continue soon thank you for pm.

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

nice start. feeling bad for khushi

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Shimmer_Vani
This fic just made it to my Fav FFs. :P <3 <3
It's very realistic and your scenes are very imagery. :) x

thanx Vani. I just love ur writing.You are among those writers who have unknowingly inspire me to write these story. Actually I have written it 2 years back ,that too in bengali.😃 I am just translating it. Thanx for your comment.🤗